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hello!!
i am trying to make a female face, (and body if the face results).
I'd like that u people critic this, to improve it and so.. :bounce:
Thanks!!
http://membres.lycos.fr/dreamdesigner/girl/girlWIP.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/dreamdesigner/girl/wire.jpg
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killahsin
03-31-2003, 11:21 PM
looks good i do think you need to tighten the facial area around the nose a bit though.
here an update, please critic my work :bounce:
http://membres.lycos.fr/dreamdesigner/girl/girlWIP2.jpg
oh please more crits...u must think something constructrive for sure...
nanabaky
04-01-2003, 09:26 AM
oh looks very good ! can't wait for full modeled character ! Eyes are cute ^^. I have nothing to really critic, it's much better than i could ever do for now
another update, sorry i've not much time :D. (i like the shape of the eyes like it is :P, but if they're not correct in any other aspect, i'd like to know it please)
http://membres.lycos.fr/dreamdesigner/girl/girlWIP3.jpg
hello!! another update...i've put eyelashes and the zone under the ear..(that corner...whatever it's meant) i've made it a bit sharper...and the zone over the ear with the bug has been fixed :bounce:
some critics would be good to improve everyday a bit more..pleasee:P...:bounce:
http://membres.lycos.fr/dreamdesigner/girl/girlWIP4.jpg
Angelus26
04-02-2003, 11:46 PM
I'd say shorten the length of the nose perhaps, she seems to have rather a long-ish nose, the eyes have sorta a natalie portman look to them, is that your reference by chance?
i love natalie's eyes and lips, yes, she was used in both, but with some modifications ;).
The rest was either created with some other references overthere (my sister too!! :buttrock: )
i'll post another update tonight (spanish hour), see ya!
hi!!
another update. Some bugs fixed...eyebrows a bit down...and a shader created...(no texture...well yes, an speckle but only for practice).
Tell me what U thing about her please! Need to make her very very good, and i don't have enough experience to make it alone.
Thanks!
http://membres.lycos.fr/dreamdesigner/girl/girlWIP5.jpg
Little_Devil
04-04-2003, 06:45 PM
Very nice mesh for first female face modell. Lokks kinda euroasian. Soooooooo close to perfect mesh.
What software do you use ?
thanks!! i use 3dsmax5, render scanline
hey! it's been a while...but i've been making tests. Well i add the base of the body here. All C&C are very very welcome!!
thanks!!! :bounce:
http://membres.lycos.fr/dreamdesigner/girl/nudegirl3.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/dreamdesigner/girl/nudegirl4.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/dreamdesigner/girl/nudegirl5.jpg
TheRow
04-08-2003, 02:21 PM
so far so good.. keep going... can't find anything to coment on for now but I'm new to the whole 3d thing my self... but as I said keep going
hi folks!! another update..waiting for C&C hehe...
thanks :bounce:
http://membres.lycos.fr/dreamdesigner/girl/nudegirl8.jpg
Ballo
04-09-2003, 11:54 PM
OHHHHHH LA LAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
se la viiiii!!!
mon amuurrrrrr!!!!
toma ya.
Eso son curvas y lo demas tonterias.
Un saludo DDS.
P.D: Hay maldito shader.....
:wip: hay maldito brazil 114 donde te habras metido....XDDD
Thanks ballo!! I'll fix the shader when i finish the model ue. Well...another update..Lots of thanks to Ballo heheh. And S.Stahlberg too for the tips.
http://membres.lycos.fr/dreamdesigner/girl/nudegirl9.jpg
hi!!!!!!! another update...bigger size!!. I've made a general remodelling, including her tits reducement.
Please C&C i wanna know if her modelling is already concluded. Thanks!!!!!!!!
http://membres.lycos.fr/dreamdesigner/girl/PFB.jpg
Blackhorse
04-16-2003, 12:20 PM
congratulations guy, you make the fist step!
more, more! this is ****ing good.
rrobert
04-16-2003, 03:27 PM
Notice that she doesn't really have eyelids.. :shrug: did you do that on purpose? and het skin is still a bit boring. Work on that and you have a nice model :bounce: ;)
well...the eyelids are a bit pushed in...she has the eyes quite opened...i tried to put more skin and...it didin't work in fact. I'm serious. But a bit more than the 1rst planes posted here...exists 4 sure!!
I'll look at that more seriously..2 people have told it.
BTW...the skin is temporal..only to post her...an un-specular grey color is so sad...
THANKS!!!!!!!
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