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tobal
08-21-2007, 04:47 PM
hi

itīs my first post here at cgtalk :)

iīm a 3d artist, but i want to learn 2d.

this is my first rendering in 2d. it is still work in progress, it needīs refinement and a Bad Ass Weapon :)

hope you like it, feel free to critic.

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/4119/roborat01lowgo1.jpg
tobal
08-22-2007, 03:01 AM
hi, a small update, got the minigun, but it still needs more detail.. fixed some bugs in the ears and tail.

lets see if tomorrow I finnished it off :)

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/4945/roborat04copymo6.jpg
tobal
08-22-2007, 03:09 AM
posted again by accident :P eheh
jebas
08-23-2007, 12:23 PM
You might consider giving the mouse a human eye brow so that the face can express an emotion of some sort. At the moment, the face is dead. I can't tell if the mouse is mean, sad, scared, or happy. It's just there. Unless that is the feeling that you were trying to show. If that's the case, I recommend placing something in the picture that is reacting to the mouse.
tobal
08-23-2007, 12:54 PM
hi :) you are right, eve seen it and some of my friends said the same.

iīll try to fix it next time round :)

thankx for the advice
iadagraca
08-24-2007, 01:42 AM
the flattened reflection looks weird...

the expression feels a bit psychotic to me...
tobal
08-24-2007, 03:15 AM
fixed the mouseīs face expression, weapon prespective and did the minigunīs magazine.

must just make a decent backdrop and I think itīs ready :P

feel free to coment...


http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/5238/mousebattlemachinelowfc4.jpg
M@DM@X
08-25-2007, 10:37 AM
that is crazy cool, really good job. i cant wait to see what else you can come up with
tobal
08-28-2007, 03:47 AM
iīve done it, finnished :P

want to move on to the 3d version of the mouse http://forums.3dtotal.com/images/smilies/smile.gif

thanks for the suport and advice http://forums.3dtotal.com/images/smilies/smile.gif hope you like it.

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/6835/battlemouselowhs0.jpg
nerdyninja
08-28-2007, 08:57 PM
i think this is looking great! What I would do though is make the reflection crisp closest to the mouse and THEN blur out. That will help the effect a lot more I believe. Bkg is great! :)
iadagraca
08-28-2007, 10:00 PM
yeah the reflection is my only problem with this painting....
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