Moutain Wreckage, Jerry Cai (2D)

[waheednasir]

nice work...:). i wonder how come it didnt get any comment.

[Nennad]

Hi,
I liked lightning and half dark half light idea for the scene!

It has a feeling of distinction, have some De Chirico atmosphere (which bring some uneasy feeling to me)

What confuses me are few thing in composition: red ribbon, at least for my eyes, is painful and does not fit... also, a rock above her head could be placed elswere, this way it draws too mush attention. Great wall is too much on the edge of the picture, and mountains are a bit repetative.

[thesquid]

lovley , i love the ribon and the feeling of space in this piece
4 stars , plus your lighing is perfect

[moonclub]

good job ,nice work

[JCai]

thank you waheednasir. thesquid, npantic, moonclub. it is an honour to get some stars up here!
and npantic, thanks for the crit. I added the ribbons just to have some sense of motion.. i dunno why i used red. i tried to keep it dim, i have no idea its hurting ur eyes O_o haha. as for the concrete block above her head is mainly used to provide a contrast to her brightly lit hair, bringing out some space. one of my friends also pointed out this :)... as for the moutains and structures i can only say im not really experienced in drawing them haha, i just let the pen take over freely.
thanks for the crit again! :)

[Milivoj-Lemonade3D]

i love the contrast of elegance and the rough nature you have going there! Good one!

[CyborgJA]

I love the lighting on the woman. Really well done !

[SylvanMist]

This is an interesting, different piece. I like it a lot :)

[JCai]

thank you Milivoj-Lemonade3D, CyborgJA and Roja
:D

[CGTalk Moderation]

This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.