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Fleury3D
08-12-2007, 05:12 PM
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Title: A pretty girl dancing
Name: Roberto Fleury
Country: Brazil
Software: Photoshop

I did this drawing with intention to expose it in the EXPOSÉ (Balistic). I imagined a sexy girl with clothes and all accessories typical of a RAVE.
PHOTOSHOP CS3
ojcruz
08-13-2007, 02:13 AM
Umm. It not bad but I think it could improve a bit. The shirt seems imposibly tight. The hair seems like you just smudged or blured all of it and the backgroud's not helping. Just a couple of suggestions. I hope it helps. Good luck with the EXPOSE.
Fleury3D
08-14-2007, 02:12 AM
Jackrabbit1,

Thanks for your commment! It is very helpfull. I agree by the hair, it was very difficult to do. I was working in a very big resolution and I did not like that I was doing, so, I tried to create a lot of shapes in different colors and smudged all to create this effect of the hair (like a motion blur).

About the t-shirt, I liked it. I know that it is not so real, but my intention was to do a sexy appearance.

The Background is my problem... :sad:I'm very sluggish to do it. I have to improve in next time...
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