Woman Head (trying)

[gnarlycranium]

That looks pretty good, JAF-- can you show us a perspective view too, and maybe a wire? An orthographic front view doesn't give us a very good idea of how the head is shaped. The proportions look good, at least-- I think the nose could use some work, and the eyes too.

[JAF]

Thanks a lot Gnarly Cranium
Here another view... ;(
I have to change a lot of parts, i know but don't find the good way. Help me plz :bounce:

[JAF]

Shaded view. If somebody could show me my errors, plz... I'm becoming mad with my human freaks :hmm:

[gnarlycranium]

That has a very good structure, JAF! Most people make their heads much too skinny, but she's looking about right.

Things I'm seeing now-- Her nose needs to be wider. The end of a person's nose tends to be about the same width as the space between their eyes.

Also, the detailing around her eyes needs some work. Get rid of the poly eyelashes for a while so we can see the eyelids better... without seeing a wire, I can't quite recommend what to specifically change, but she needs some more definition around the eyelids, and the subtle folds and things under the eye. The skin should have some roundness to it there like it's wrapping around her eyeball.

Her mouth looks good, I like the fullness of the lips-- but the bulge of the jowls leading down from the lower lip towards the jaw is too pronounced and goes down too far, giving her a look like she's got a couple marbles in her cheeks. It's subtle, won't take much to fix.

Also, her ear is a really weird shape. It's about the right height, but it's too flat and round, making it look too big.

[JAF]

Thanks a lot again Gnarly Cranium.
Here a wireframe.
I will work again with your precious advice.
I need to work again before to send another picture...
Thanks! :bounce:

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