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kedishi-san
08-04-2007, 11:47 AM
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Title: Sarah Montclaire
Name: Keddy Davis
Country: United Kingdom
Software: Photoshop

I was asked by Model Sarah Montclaire (www.sarahmontclaire.com) to come up with a painting for her...

Using various photographs from her websits, and other references and a little guidance from her, I came up with this...
oogieboogietoogie
08-05-2007, 03:12 PM
Hi Keddy,

Nice red dress and good work on her pose :) I think there are still some anatomy problems, especially with her right arm. The face and legs seem a little flat as well.
LS Knight
08-05-2007, 06:06 PM
This is OK but I think you need to pull away from this for a bit and take a fresh start. This really doesn't capture her tough girl look and I don't think this looks all that much like her. It might have been better to not do a straight on approach to her face either. Slightly turned might have given her more character. I suggest maybe painting over one of the photos to get to know her face better.
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