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artofsw
08-04-2007, 02:18 AM
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Title: BadLands
Name: Simon Wright
Country: Australia
Software: Photoshop

I entered this artwork into Exotique 3 but unfortunately it didn't get selected. I enjoyed working on this piece. It was completed over 12 hours. Any critique welcome.
oogieboogietoogie
08-04-2007, 05:04 PM
Hi Simon,

Your characters - especially the woman - are well done, but I think the landscape pulls away from their realism. I think if you softened the mountains it the background by blurring them and including more colors from the sky, it would create more sense of depth.
LS Knight
08-05-2007, 06:12 PM
I'd say the BG is the largest issue but in general more contrast and deeper shaddows. I think you were too conservative, a trait I share.
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