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Kavelioc
08-03-2007, 05:32 PM
Can anyone help me please. I've been working on it for hours and hate it. I might just change the background all together, what do does any one thinK?

http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/8128/spaceship4flatsmall2qm5.jpg
Kavelioc
08-03-2007, 11:52 PM
I would welcome some thoughts.
SmallPoly
08-04-2007, 02:03 AM
Hi Kavelioc.

Here are the main things bothering me about the painting:

-The road and exhaust lead the eye past the plane and out of the painting.
-The tailfin of the spaceship seems to be recieving inconsistent lighting with the rest of its body. It should acutally be coplanar with the area recieving the main highlight.
-The brightness of the exhaust is fighting for attention with the highlights on the body of the spaceship
-Something about the perspective of the wings feels off
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