Character : Atro

[Darius43321]

heeheee he's soo...cute sorry i get kinda wierd around things that are cute

but ya it looks good no crits here

[DAbuel]

Darius43321,
Thanks! Yeah he's my pride and joy! I got a story going for him Its just i dont have the time to Make it! But deff all my Friends thinks he is cute and would make a great Character for a TV series if it ever came to it! hehe!:bounce:

[SimeX]

I really love the character he looks somehow spectacular He is really great good job

[DAbuel]

SimeX: Thanks!

[DAbuel]

here are some other Atro Pictures!

http://www.daveabuel.com/3d3.jpg
this is the first Generation Atro Made with Nurbs!
http://www.daveabuel.com/3d4.jpg
This is the morph targets and I use it for AIM's Smilies
http://www.daveabuel.com/atroandfemale.jpg
This is just a sketch of Atro and his sidekick Chick( he like em Tall ;) )

[DAbuel]

http://www.daveabuel.com/daveandatro.jpg
this is Atro and I!
http://www.daveabuel.com/kaciandatro.jpg
And this is my friend Kaci with Atro!

[Tikisan]

:applause: awwww...he definitely is adorable...only thing i see is that its a little hard to see that he is smiling fully...maybe have the smile reach his cheeks a little more?...and whats his story?

[DAbuel]

Tikisan Thanks!!!
here is a link to theStoryboards (http://www.daveabuel.com/Storyboards.htm)


The name of the story is called Marshmellows!

[digital_rhino]

Wow...very cute! :bounce: Oh hey look! there's a character standing next to her. He's cute too! Good job.:thumbsup:

[Witchy]

Excellent stuff, he has a lot about him.

[DAbuel]

digital_rhino: haha! very funny! but yes she is cute!

Witchy: thanks! I hope it dose!

Well thanks to all that voted! Keep bringing on the feedback! Love to hear your thoughts!!!!

[Ender0910]

awsome stuff!

In your aim smiley one, I love that bottom right face :D

good work :)

[DAbuel]

Ender0910: Thanks Allot! Personaly I go for the Joe Cool Smiley :cool:

[SimeX]

Can we see some more poses I cant stop watching at the poses you made they look really cool

[JohnD]

Hey,
Pretty cool character. Got any animations?

[DAbuel]

JohnD: Thanks! No unfortunately Im not that good in Animation and I dont want to look foolish in trying! Im more of the modeler and Rigger!

[Vash T Stampede]

" I dont want to look foolish in trying!"


Only fools never try... Go for it!

:sad:

[Wetterschneider]

Yeah Dave, I just got done looking at your site, and it's clear that your skills are rapidly developing. Atro is an awesome looking character, well executed and with what looks to be a complete rig. I'm thinking you should definitely try your hand at animating. Sure you may not like the first few thing you do, but we all went through that.

[Goon]

Thats a fine looking model. Great job.
Just stop putting so much grain in your renders, it knocks out so much of the detail.

[M.Rogne]

He is very cute, indeed. I like the short legs. Nice lil fellow you got there :thumbsup:

[Tikisan]

yeah..id agree with the rest that you should just try it with the animation...only one way to figure out if youre rigs are working correctly anyways:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[Chaos Maximus]

I agree with everyone, Animate! just try it.

Other than that, im a little distracted because it looks like he doesnt have a throat, when you look at his mouth it just stops.

may be an illusion, if not, i think you should fix it.

also, less grain, a little is ok, just not that much, it messes up the good job you did camera matching, cause he has more grain than the pictures themselves.

[Deathcricket]

New to the forum and simply amazed at the work I'm seeing here. Your model is quite good. The only suggestion I would give is to have sone different skin tones or shading in the differnet facial areas. The little freckles are a good start there on the forehead, but the ears and eye area seem a little sparse. Usually this is broken up by hair or jewelry or some sort. The guy seems great hairless so I would not recommend that. Just something to break up the same texture on his ears nose, neck and face. Great personality on the guy though. I would think he's a big meanie like Stitch (from Lilo & Stitch).

:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[M_Orlich]

great design. not sure about the stone pants.

[Raul-Reznek]

I think it's really cool :D

[costas]

Excellent work dude!!!:applause: :applause:

[webfox]

He could be generally accepted by folks, but his face looks like the box modeling defines his features. He doesn't look like he was sketched out first, but, instead, was just squeezed out polygon by polygon. There's no reason to have that many rows of polys making his nose when it's just a square.

Superior animation and true acting character can overcome all this and make him endearing, but as far as an organic being, it's not making sense, visually. There's no evolutionary reason for a the geometric features.

He has a cuteness factor, but not a believablity factor.

I'm not saying he's bad, but that he's just not what I accept as a believable life form.

[glorydays]

looking good

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