Environment: Quaint Downtown

[Darius43321]

The green things on the building(cant remember what they are called right now) are to..diffused it looks like just give em some detail cause right now it looksl ike a green blocb

[D_Nice]

Yeah the awnings ( ;) ) could use a bit more detail. I really like the DOF and the overall look of the bricks and the windows. From a compositing standpoint, it isn't fitting in too well with the treeline in the back. I'm sure if you really want it to fit, b/c that would require making the models look much more faded out to match the stock photo. Since it's for a proposal, I'm sure you want the buildings to look top notch and really stand out. :thumbsup:


I like it all very much.

[A3Imaging]

It is simply amazing how I can miss something after constantly looking at the scene. Thats what C&C is for! Updated improved awning image in the works! :) Thanks for the comments thus far. :

:thumbsup:

[Tuan]

hmmm.....i agree, the green thingy need some work on that and the picture looks flat, it doesn't have much depth into it, need a bit more shadowing and the texturing on the roof, it aslo loo ks really flat but overall looks good.
:)

[A3Imaging]

Here is the new and sugestions taken into account version. Switched the angle a tad, changed awning texture completely, shadowing etc. etc. etc :)

http://www.a3imaging.com/5-Compressed.jpg



Much improved (at least I think so! :))

:applause:

[Ls3D]

Yes, much improved.. & probably good enough for a viz sim. But if you still want some feedback:

My suggestions would be to create more dynamic range in the image by letting the sun light be the hottest light in the scene and reducing/attenuating your fill light(s). The DOF might be better done in post (photoshop) and why not make the sky blue and saturate the trees a bit.

Also the color of the car in the photo closely matches the brick work, so you might want to introduce a cool color there by hue shift - blue would complement the new sky and break up the overall tone of the rendering.

Good job!

-Shea
www.Ls3D.com

:cool:

One last thing - reflection maps are nice and well choosen but don't you think windows in the shadows would have hard reflections? By hard I mean high contrast.

[Zoebabie]

Wonderful. thats the same look I`m going 4 on my church project. If I wasn`t an animator, I couldn`t tell if thats a picture or model. Can you explain how you did it that way? Philly Phinest:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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