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aeslyn
07-30-2007, 09:58 AM
Hi everyone! I'm new to CGSociety, figured I put this forum to valuable use. As the thread title states, I'm in need of some critiques. These may not be the best screenshots I have but I hope they'll give enough info for feedback. I currently do not have the poly count (the info and files are on my brother's computer at the moment). I don't want to overflow this thread right away with everything I'm working on so here's what I have to start. Thanks in advance for your help. :)


-Aeslyn-




Fairy home props
(The Concept)
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c30/adela111/cgsociety/fairy_conceptcopy.jpg


(3d Version - Low poly)
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c30/adela111/cgsociety/1.jpg


Weapons
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c30/adela111/cgsociety/newweapons.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c30/adela111/cgsociety/axe3.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c30/adela111/cgsociety/axe2.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c30/adela111/cgsociety/axe1.jpg
HellBoy
07-31-2007, 12:02 PM
Nice concept and textures m8. Nothing to critique to be honest :sad:
Por@szek
07-31-2007, 02:31 PM
Looks very nicely. Bed is wicked, I love the design and final model. Simply awesome.
Vertex Groover
07-31-2007, 03:58 PM
Agreed.

The weapons have a beautiful style to them. Great work.
heavyness
07-31-2007, 04:18 PM
love the weapons and the concept drawings... very colorful.

the bed could use a couple more polys. i know it's suppose to be lowpoly, but that seems DS/PSP spec to me. i would add more polys to the bed's headboard and the bed cushion.

but, if your going for DS/PSP specs, bravo!
squidpickle
07-31-2007, 07:27 PM
I'm totally digging the the models and textures. Even in their low poly state I can see how close they are to the concept. Can't wait to see more.
RO
07-31-2007, 07:38 PM
nice models make a nice scene with all these :)
kromano
07-31-2007, 11:59 PM
Very nice work, I think your weapon models are very clean and stylish.
I think I'm going to have to disagree with Heavy about the polycount on the bed. I think it has a great style with the sharp edges the lower polycount gives it. However the leaf-texture drapes above the bed seem a little too fuzzy or low-res compared to the rest. Perhaps it's just this monitor here at school (they're old CRTs) though.

In all very nice work, from concept to finished prop and weapon I think you've got serious talent.
aeslyn
08-01-2007, 01:07 AM
Thanks, everyone! I greatly appreciate it! I've been lacking confidence but your critiques are helping a lot now! I will surely post up more soon!

And yes, Heavy, I was going for the DS/PSP low poly spec. Figured I give myself a poly limit and see how well I can pull things off. :D Also, I forgot to mention that the weapon concepts were actually done by a good friend, Re'Jean DuBois. With his permission, I made 3D versions of them.

Thanks again, everyone for your critiques!
aeslyn
08-01-2007, 01:13 AM
Very nice work, I think your weapon models are very clean and stylish.
I think I'm going to have to disagree with Heavy about the polycount on the bed. I think it has a great style with the sharp edges the lower polycount gives it. However the leaf-texture drapes above the bed seem a little too fuzzy or low-res compared to the rest. Perhaps it's just this monitor here at school (they're old CRTs) though.

In all very nice work, from concept to finished prop and weapon I think you've got serious talent.


Thanks, Kromano. :) I do agree with the drape textures. I will have to go back and sharpen them up. I wish it was your school monitors, however, sadly for us all (especially me), it's not. LOL. :D
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