Old phonograph, Johann Pu (3D)

[Destrega]

wow I like this image very much, altough it doesn't remind me of an old photograph as you proposed..
I like her skin texture and shader and the whole clothes, that looks already very realistic.
Maybe her left hand (From her point of view) seems a bit big, or the lower ar section above seems a bit thin...
So good work, 4* from me

[DrZenith]

I agree with Destrega, it doesn't remind me of an old photograph either. Mainly because nothing about the image has been aged in post from the looks of it.

In terms of 3D, i think it's good. The modelling of the girl and her clothes is quite solid, except for her hands which are far too large. I really like the record player, it looks great. And good work modelling clothes.

Lighting, it seems like she's lit by a different setup to the background. Just a few minor things - Her right hand side should be darker according to the rest of the image, and she has a halo outline down her sides.

Good work overall.

[DanielAlves]

Good work...

But the hands.... it is a very big....

:)

[tiber]

Great work. The face seems almost perfect to me. But i dont think the neck would end up large like this and the arms and hands could use a more dynamic pose.

[johnstrieder]

Old PHONOgraph! Not Photograph! But i like it too yery much :-)

[Vexona]

nice character, I like the feel. I wanna see the character move and talk to see if the personality im sensing it has, is the actual personality.

[maceska]

I find the character quite appealing, the gentle expression on the face draws my attention as well, the character's left hand seems a little disproportionate. It is a very nice work.

Kind regards
Kristin

[Silverwing]

Sexy girl...
I love how she looks and
I love the mood of the pic.
Very nice modeling and good
shaders and textures. Her hands
indeed are a little big... but
although the pic is great. 4*

[gaiXyn]

at first glance it looks great!!....but looking closely you begin to see alot of issues with the character's proportions....herNeck deforms oddly not to mention it's almost the same size as her thighs....and many talked about the hands...the best thing about the character is her face and expression....I guess it can get away if it was a stylize charater tho.....

so the modeling of the girl needs more work.....but the modeling and texturing of herClothes are excellent!!....<< I have nothing to say about that... :)...and herSkin looks veryNice too!!


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[teemto]

man hands!
otherwise good

[milannnnnnnn]

It's a nice work,I like your character and render,
3*
:applause:

[johann213]

Thanks for all friends:) ,very kind of you give me the opinions, I have many things to learn and work,and I will work hard for my next work.

Thanks for everyone again.:)

[xxbinxx]

very nice lady and very nice image ... I think the hand is not very good ...keep it up

[arizaga]

This girl is beautiful in all aspects I love how she's designed plenty of the good things of a chinese girl in my opinion.(My wife is chinese). Fantastic creation 5 stars from me :)

[kastaniga]

not good composition... very good textures and clothes...
hands modeling has anatomical problem... skin shader perfect...

congrats my friend,3* from me...
good days...

[ilusiondigital]

Some parts of this image are really great. Very artistic!!

Congratz

[HapZungLam]

very good lighting. I like the form and composition of this picture. Very well done

The critique i'd give is that you may scale her hand down a bit. Right not it seems alittle too big comparing to her skinny body

[zszs]

nice work!!
i like it.
4* from me

[zhanghuanhuan]

你的作品很牛b，喜欢这种感觉的，给你****，加油

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