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kalasjnikov
03-26-2003, 03:48 PM
Ey,

My first post on this eminent site...
A selfportrait of me i've been working on for a while. Theres still some work to be done, like hair... But its basicly finished...
http://www.mdstud.chalmers.se/~md9faynt/hasse/jag_lrg.jpg
http://www.mdstud.chalmers.se/~md9faynt/hasse/jag02.jpg
gimme som pros & cos... tell me what/if you like or sucks

TimWoods
03-26-2003, 04:13 PM
cant see images man...:shrug:

kalasjnikov
03-26-2003, 05:13 PM
my, server crashed offcourse!!! my kind of luck!!

but are working now :scream:

LarsSon
03-26-2003, 05:30 PM
Is that how you feel or something?

Well, i like it a lot. There's so many intresting things where your eyes follow. Good idea to blur that front area so much. Feels like you have to know what is really in there, but you just can't focus enough.

Compositing is very intensive. It's still image, but there's a lot of movement in the air.

Only thing what i don't like is those lightrays coming from backwindow. It breaks your style. It doesn't fit. Maybe not so strong rays?

First one is better. Did you use cinelook-grain or is it just hand made filmlook? Anyway it works.

kalasjnikov
03-26-2003, 08:25 PM
Thanks very much Larsson for your constructive comments, hehe yes, well i had this idea to plug the tub into the internet... it did'nt work very well. Im just waiting for some stupid entrepreneur to crack the idea: SURF ON THE NET IN THE BATH!!! Invention of the millenium...

I think the first image is better to, added the red stuff to get some bounce in the colors...
I do agree with you on the rays in the window. gonna fix that..

LowEndFrequency
03-27-2003, 02:57 AM
very nice concept, and good camera angles.

My only gripes are the film grain, kill it, it takes away from the image... and also the light rays look way to sharp

Other than that keep up the good work

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