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Timmay
07-22-2007, 11:48 PM
Ok here is another one. A simple day for night.
Matte:

http://www.digitaltimmay.com/wips/dockwip.jpg

Original:

http://www.digitaltimmay.com/wips/origdock.jpg

I'm going to replace the foreground water with footage.
Odd...on my computer the jpg image looks like I want it to, but when I view the same image in the browser its really dark.
It's adjusted so you can view it correctly in the browser now.
Timmay
07-23-2007, 06:25 PM
An update fixing some errors.

http://www.digitaltimmay.com/wips/dock2.jpg
JJASSO
07-24-2007, 05:57 AM
Hi Tim , well itīs looking good some improvements would help

the highlight over the water could be a little stronger as well as on the rails so you can separete them from the dark background

I donīt feel the composition strong eventhough the dock leads you to some where, but at the end thereīs nothing but the moon I would add something more interesting like a lighthouse or a bigger element at the end
Timmay
07-24-2007, 07:14 AM
Hey jaime thanx for the input. The sky isnt really that dark on my original file. When I view the image in a browser its almost completely black so I have to adjust it alot to make the web image appear as my orignal. I guess browsers cant display as much blacks.
I like the idea of a lighthouse. I wanted to do something with the dock but couldn't think of a thing.
There is some type of communications station at the end, maybe I'll ehance that a bit.

Thanx!
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