character: earith

[unrealwarfare]

very nice work! but i believe the skin looks too synthetic.

[ja3d]

Nice work! beautifull woman face, great modelling and morphing, only change one this the front of the hair it,s too "up" but the work with hair it,s nice too.

:thumbsup:

[sky-hi]

to unrealwarfare:

thank your comment,

the face's map is simple,
http://home.pchome.com.tw/service/d_skysea/face.jpg
need details!! @_@


to ja3d:

thank you ~_~

[SimeX]

OMG That looks really awsome I love it:drool: :drool:

[Daniel Ho]

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[amos_chid]

I like it :buttrock:
stylized Aerith :D

[T0BER]

Her nose seems a bit puffy at the upper nostril area; it needs a bit more definition there. The area above her lip makes it look like a moustache, the shading there looks a bit strange. More detail is needed in her ponytail; it's a bit too smooth looking. You might want to consider a bit more detail in her ear as well.

Otherwise she looks great, kinda what I imagine Aerith would have looked like in Final Fantasy VII. :)

All the best.

[Threedeemer]

Lovely modeling style. Not too realistic not too cartoonish, great blend of both, I'm impressed. :buttrock: :thumbsup:
I've tried to achieve a hybrid look like that but couldnt achieve it.

[Ferg]

great model, but I'm going to give you some crits just because nobody else will :-p

this is constructive criticism, remember that

the ears are too big. Take a glance at an anatomy site or book, and you should be able to get it right. You're not that far off though.

The hair behind the ear doesn't look right, try modeling that part differently.

The hair looks too much like a big striped hat. Try playing with the texture to make the individual strands stand out a little more.

Look up shoulder and collar anatomy and adjust her upper chest/shoulders accordingly. Yes I know it's a style but incorrect anatomy is distracting, not stylish (unless the rest of the model is stylized in the same "off" way, which it's not).

This has the potential to be a great model (it already looks great), I am just pointing out things that I notice as being a little off to me. I am by no means a 3d or anatomy guru. And I know this is in the finished art forum and not the wip forum, but an artist should always be able (and willing) to improve, eh?

just my 2 cents...

[sky-hi]

:beer: Thank you all~~!!

your comments is very important to me:D thanks again!!

[deunan]

nice model...

maybe it's just me, but i think the nose is a little big and long compared to the rest of the proportions of the face. i think if you wanna go big, then maybe do a less realistic nose. the eyes might look better if it's wider vertically, but maybe u made it squint. from observation i realized that for the style that you're going for, the best looking ones have the similar formula. big eyes, smaller nose, and slightly smaller mouth. but if you wanna creat your individual style then it's cool.

it's hard to mix realistic features with anime style features. if you can find the balance inbetween the two, then you'll have some great stuff. hope this helps. ;)

cheers.

[nanoma]

If I were you, I'll give her more hair in the front, and try to vivify her eyes. And I think a less dramatic lighting will fit her mood better. Afterall, she's Aerith, the optimistic one...

Keep going :scream:

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