Male Head nearly finished need c&c

[BiTMAP]

diffuse your spec a bit more as well as lower its value, maybe make the spec a map and then lower its brightness? and decrease the decay.

also your hair looks a little too flat and regular, may i suggest messing it up a "bit" ? (now why couldn't I get the hair to go like that for me in my paintbrush model :S grr XSI)

[scorpion]

Originally posted by BiTMAP
diffuse your spec a bit more as well as lower its value, maybe make the spec a map and then lower its brightness? and decrease the decay.

also your hair looks a little too flat and regular, may i suggest messing it up a "bit" ? (now why couldn't I get the hair to go like that for me in my paintbrush model :S grr XSI)


Lets see what I can do with the hair. I'm not sure how it's gonna end cause this is the first time I'm really using shag:hair.
The Specularity is possible I think.

I hope there will come more c&c.

[Threedeemer]

Looks good. :thumbsup:
I agree with the suggestions by BiTMAP. Also while the ear looks good it seems a bit soft in structure compared to the style of the head. Maybe also try adding more density to the eyebrows.

[qu2k]

wow this is really good

the skin seems too bright though... or something

[hesido]

Nicely put.

You can tweak the eyebrows so they are combed. And the edges of the brows has to be less dense.

For his shave: you can put some irregularity to the edges of the shaved facial hair, so there shouldn't be a definitive edge, especially part below the lips. The roots of the hair forms a straight line which is an undesired thing.

The eyes are as if they are on a plane. You should add more depth to the lateral edge of the eyes, the lateral commissure of the eyes are always behind the medial one, and with this you have to change other parts but be sure your model will look better.

[FallenSwordsman]

I agree with the others - the eyebrows need a little combing. One thing I also noticed was that the rim of the nostril seems extremely sharp - you need to try to soften that up a little. A bit of bump on the lips will go a long way too.

[gnarlycranium]

I think the problem with the shape of the eyes lies in the fact that the eyeballs themselves are too big. The eyes will have a nicer curve if the eyeballs have a diameter just slightly bigger than the eye opening itself.

[zzacmann]

Looks a little like Colin Farrel to me. Who are you using as a reference?

[scorpion]

Thx for all the suggestions. I think some of them will get changed.
To the eyeballs they are only a bit larger than the eye opening.
And there is actually no reference pic.

[scorpion]

Only a few changes done.

http://www.schuchi.net/images/head2.jpg

[tomb]

Looking good. I think his jaw might be a bit far forward like he has an underbite. Also his eyebrows may be a bit thin.

[Neox]

could you show him from a few other angles?

[scorpion]

Originally posted by Neox
could you show him from a few other angles?


Yeah this is possible but it takes a little time, cause I need to render them.

[Neox]

no hair and not textures please, just the model :)
the textures are good no question, and i'm a modeller so i want to crit the model ;)

[scorpion]

Ok here we go. I've made six pictures a gray shaded and a wireframe.

Front

http://www.schuchi.net/images/head_gray_front.jpg
http://www.schuchi.net/images/head_gray_front_wire.jpg


Left

http://www.schuchi.net/images/head_gray_left.jpg
http://www.schuchi.net/images/head_gray_left_wire.jpg


Perspective

http://www.schuchi.net/images/head_gray_persp.jpg
http://www.schuchi.net/images/head_gray_persp_wire.jpg

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