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FarshadRoknipour
07-17-2007, 06:18 AM
I am attending college right now and I wanted to gain some feedback from professionals. Please be honest, but dont tear me apart too much. lol

embryotic
07-17-2007, 08:01 AM
I can see that your work is quite stylized but ill say whatever comes to my mind:

perhaps there is too much filters being applied - especially in the sky

your light source comes from below, but the clouds are lit as if from above

There are too many colours competing - try to choose a dominant colour and use it as a scheme

the ocean is blue - but it reflects the sky - and so it should be purple and pink.

your boat should point towards your centre - not out of it

I made a quick paint over - hope you dont mind

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/9676/attachment1rh6.jpg

this is all just my opinion by the way :)

peace

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