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sunimaion

07-17-2007, 01:57 AM

its a old animation done by me... when i used to play with the boxes and the balls.... just wanted to show u guys... and know my faults...and also next 3 and 4 were some recent works

plzz critic 4 that.... and show me my faults...

1 . http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_aZ2k4fwEvk

2 . http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vzNc34RSPcc

3. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aZkcI54IwlQ ( please read the lines in youtube )

4. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ZpDZHPT6pI ( please read the lines in youtube before
watchin the animation)

4 clips are there.... hope u njoy and hope i can learn more

plzzz plzzz help me and show my faults...plzzz

EarBrawley

07-17-2007, 05:47 AM

3 - your fist jump is really great. I think the second one could slow up a bit, similar to the first jump.

4 - it feels like there is not enough overlap. the leg and body seems to move up at the same time. Also, feels like the feet slow into the steps, they should hit the ground harder.

Cheers

sunimaion

07-17-2007, 01:25 PM

hai hi... thanx 4 the comments.... and ya i got it ... thanx
i vil make it done soon and show u soon...
its really helps me ..... thanx for the advise

plzz tell abt the box play no 1 and no 2

and show me my fault again and again..

thanx again

warriorash

07-20-2007, 02:41 PM

i love the machine walk cycle..

sunimaion

07-20-2007, 02:49 PM

hai ash... thanx .. and thanx for likin a bit of my animation...

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