character animation,pleae look

[FFNeX]

1 and 3 are really good, but I think you could work more on the second one, I think the part where the pole goes down needs a few more frames, and the pole itself should bend a little with the mouse's weight.

[harmonic01]

Yeah agree, 2nd one needs work. That part when thle hits the ground, the character just snaps so the top, so you need a few more frames there. Duaring a landing I'd spread the hands a bit wider as if he tries to balance himslef, it's harder to palance and land on 2 feet with hands at their sides.

on the 3rd one, when the mouse jumps, duaring a landing his arms should be a little behind the body pelvis as well as the joins on the spine and the head should be a bit behind the pelvis too. Think of it as the pelvis generates the movement and the rest follows. Right now it's a bit too unison. Anyways, not quite sure if I'm making any sence. Overall, it's pretty good, though.

can't find falws in the 1st one, sorry. :-)

[lf3d]

harmonic01
FFNeX
very thanks!!!applause:
I have learnt a lot of things from your suggestion .
sorry my English is very poor.i am Chinese
:surprised :
I will pay attention to the pelvis even more in the making for the future
thanks!:bounce:

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