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Raphael-Lacoste
03-24-2003, 07:55 PM
http://raphael.lacoste.free.fr/ftp/CG_forums/lotbnet.jpg

I repost it with the right name for the subject :)

and background...
what do you think?

phoenix2k
03-24-2003, 07:57 PM
wow... great picture... you should have posed this in the lotr challenge :)... again... great work!!!

Dreamwave
03-24-2003, 08:10 PM
cool, can you post a close-up or picture of the tattoos too?

DrakeX
03-24-2003, 08:11 PM
finally we meet the guy responsible for all the trouble in Alfred Hitchcock's "The Birds" :D

great work :) i love the scenery, the guy has some shading issues but very well done overall.

FatAssasin
03-24-2003, 08:22 PM
Looks really good. I like the landscape in the background. Is that modeled or a photograph? And another question, is his hair supposed to be flapping in the wind or does it just stick out in different directions? It's hard to tell.

JIII
03-24-2003, 08:27 PM
love that. I have a thing for soft renders. just cant take to many teched out hard as heck pics+renders.

nice peice of artwork.

Zmaster
03-24-2003, 08:28 PM
very good,the environnemetn and the character look great !

pascal_blanche
03-24-2003, 09:06 PM
really neat pict raph :) (cofee?)

E.Z. Schwartz
03-24-2003, 09:18 PM
Looks good. His right hand seems to lack nuckles though. How'd you do the trees? They look very nice.

MROGER
03-24-2003, 09:39 PM
Hey :)
El Rafo qui fait des persos maintenant :)

I want more characters and if possible females characters ;)

Matt
03-24-2003, 09:44 PM
Truly inspiring. Most people use formulas when creating characters. "A little of this guy, and a little of this guy." So really they're using elements from other creations.

This looks strikingly original, and I'm glad to see a lot of stuff like this appear lately.

Keep it up.

g3n
03-24-2003, 10:11 PM
whoo thats great :bounce:

KolbyJukes
03-24-2003, 10:34 PM
I'd say the foreground (the guy and the platform) is lacking in detail in comparison to the background (which is beautiful :thumbsup: - is it a painting?).

Is it just me or is there some weird geometry around the hip?

Can we see a wire?

-Kol.

Nyceane
03-24-2003, 10:34 PM
nice, what program you used?

DZL
03-24-2003, 10:53 PM
very well done. i like the soft render as well - could you give us an idea of what software/renderer you used, and how you got that soft look? the background is amazing - great detail...

imashination
03-24-2003, 10:54 PM
Is the background made in Vue4 by any chance?

baby
03-24-2003, 10:59 PM
ilzonleutandeufèrmumuzeulékaribou ?! ;)


Nice pict...

Reza_82ir
03-24-2003, 11:06 PM
WoW!Realy Great Work:applause:

draconix
03-24-2003, 11:11 PM
That is a cool pic!

The character is interesting. The background looks like a painting, like someone mentioned before.

Software(s) used ?

S_3D_A
03-24-2003, 11:33 PM
damn:)

Raphael-Lacoste
03-24-2003, 11:35 PM
thanks guys! I used Max 4, after Softimage 4... I think I won't go back on softimage now :)
the mountain in the background is 3d with a huge texture of several landscapes I shooted during my holydays in quebec ;)
The foregrounds trees are 2D fakes, from Bordeaux in France!
its a magical mix of france and Quebec ! :p

I used a scanline renderer :bounce:
No GI, just omnis and direct lights,


See ya!

iggiza
03-24-2003, 11:37 PM
That's a awesome render, beautiful ligthing and colors!!!

Mr_BUG
03-25-2003, 12:27 AM
well the composition is really good but i think the lightning on the character doesn't match the rest of the scene, there is a kind of difference i can't really define

btw very niiice pict, i love the details of the background.

goodlag
03-25-2003, 12:32 AM
wow great work

good lighting & background work

ACFred
03-25-2003, 02:07 AM
Nice job. The image has a really nice feel to it.

I think the pose of the character is a bit unnatural, though. If he's going to have his hand on the staff without putting his elbow on his thigh/knee, then I think it'd look better if his hand was further to the right, causing the staff to also lean more to the right. If you want the staff in that location, have him lean his elbow on his thigh, which would also affect the position of his right shoulder/clavicle region.
Also, with that pose, his right hand is kinked just a bit.

If you were to move his right hand to the right some more, making his staff lean to the his right (picture left), you'd create a bit of a diagonal, which would help the composition a bit. Right now, the darkness and vertical nature of the staff is really glaring.

If you change his pose at all, make sure you go in and give a little weight to his pose, as if there is an effort to have his body in that position, even if it's slight.
Many posed models have the feel that they are infinitely light and that there is no stress involved with the pose they're holding. In those cases, the general shape of the pose looks good but doesn't go the extra distance to portray the weight of the character, too.

I really like the character you've created. What are those tentacles on his head used for?

Alec

John_Shaft
03-25-2003, 02:50 AM
Amazing work but the only thing that caught my eye was that stomach and his left leg. The stomach looks weird and the leg looks bigger then the other one. But all in all its really sweet.

Michael Chen
03-25-2003, 04:26 AM
I like your style, looks a bit toony :) (just my opinion)

He looks like some maori character :D

piajartist
03-25-2003, 06:40 AM
It has that Protoss look for fellow Starcraft players:cool:

Chaos Maximus
03-25-2003, 06:55 AM
love this pic and all of the detail visable.

if you make a bird, a detailed one it would be awesome to have him interacting with one, possibly on that stick to the left, seems sort of obvious.

it would show some more controol over the birds he is 'lord of'

awesome job, i love it, mabey one day ill be this good, seigh

have fun, keep it up

Psycholink
03-25-2003, 07:37 AM
Very cool! :bounce:
can you post a wirefire?

TheWireframe
03-25-2003, 09:34 AM
That's freakin amazing! Can you do a closeup on those feathers? They are simply unreal to me!!:bounce:

WTFG!!!:applause:

Raphael-Lacoste
03-25-2003, 12:38 PM
thanks for your comments! they are very helpfull :)
here is the Wire for people who asked for it!

thanks Michel, j'ai utilisé ton tuto! et oui, un jour si j'ai le temps, je passe à la femelle ;) ça va bien à lyon?

ehe pascal pas trop de Café! je suis nerveux en ce moment :buttrock:

yes mr bug, I didn't use exactely the same light for the character, I didn't want so see i too backlighted, I think its Ok but your right :)

baby, where do you work @ ubi? france? non..hélas je crois que je n'aurais plus beaucoup de temps pour ce genre d'à cotés!
ps: vous cherchez du monde pour l'année prochaine? :)

http://raphael.lacoste.free.fr/ftp/CG_forums/wire.jpg

phoenix2k
03-25-2003, 12:48 PM
wow... great job eith the model and especially the background!! :eek:

insanelight
03-25-2003, 03:34 PM
Amazing! :thumbsup:

Psycholink
03-25-2003, 04:28 PM
gentil! Combien de temps heure de faire?

hanzo
03-25-2003, 05:32 PM
cool/excellent work man!

noff said.....

Biohazard
03-25-2003, 06:17 PM
Joli taf mon Raph.
Vanille française ?

Nice faked landscapes ! It's impossible to recognize the "Parc Lafontaine". ;)
And very nice atmosphere too... :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

kr3ml
03-25-2003, 09:29 PM
Man this is a very nice picture... Love the style... keep up whit it

Raphael-Lacoste
03-27-2003, 01:14 AM
thank you guys!:beer:
unfortunately, I won't have a lot of time to do another picture soon...Too much work now, pfffff ! need holydays!:bounce: :bounce:

michelleblue
03-27-2003, 06:12 AM
I like the look of the character alot:bounce:
Did you design it yoursef?

pascal_blanche
03-27-2003, 04:00 PM
baby c'est un asti de francais ubisoftien comme nous ouais... on va finir par tous s'y retrouver :P
bon sauf que nous a montreal, on est dans de plus chouettes loacaux, on a les meilleures equipes, le meilleur cafe..... ;)

baby
03-27-2003, 04:09 PM
déprime...

pascal_blanche
03-27-2003, 04:14 PM
LOL

baby
03-27-2003, 04:34 PM
que tu voulais dire 2* moins cher aussi a la fin de ta phrase... ;)


mais c vrai qu'ils sont forts ces canadziens... :thumbsup:

facial
04-02-2003, 03:34 AM
Hey,El Rafo, Glad to see you work again. This work looks great, LOve it. Keep post up.:thumbsup:

Raphael-Lacoste
04-05-2003, 07:16 AM
hey! thank you panda facial :)
I love your work too, when will we have the complete short movie of your 3d chinese water color ?
I'm waiting for it! keep me aware:bounce:
cheers,


raf

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