CGTalk - House by the farm

MirMarg

07-13-2007, 03:32 AM

Hello All. Here is my next matte painting. I have not yet properly addressed the shadows, lighting, color correction, because I am first making sure the composition and arrangement of the pieces are correct. I think perspective seems to be my biggest challenge in matte painting so after I know that's complete I will make changes to the lighting, color, etc... I'd love to hear what you all think so far!
Thanks,
miriam

sources:
http://mirmarg.com/house_farm_refs1.jpg
http://mirmarg.com/house_farm_refGarden.jpg
http://mirmarg.com/house_farm_refHouse.jpg

composite:
http://mirmarg.com/gardens_houseV2.jpg

JJASSO

07-13-2007, 09:10 PM

Hi Miriam, welcome to this forum, well let's see , I think ,first of all, visual composition, I don't know what's your focal point here, the middleground building or the foreground house? perspective is not working on either of them yet, try to fix that, the lack of detail on the pathway to the garage is making this not photorealistic , change the sky as well , add some interesting clouds . this is my point of view so far, let's see later how you do the lighting and integration later
keep it up!

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