Gladiator

[cdinic]

looks excellent nice job@!

here are the specific I noticed...

neck joining the shoulders
pointy adams apple
quads
crotch of the thumb, hands in general
definition of lats
between pecs
shoulder and shoulder to bicep joining

hope that helps.. keep it up you've got alot going for ya
-Chris

[Joe Gosselin]

Thanks for the crits what exactly would you change with the quads

[cdinic]

not shure about how to improve the quads.... looking at them again I think they're alright. but now I"m seeing the bicep to forearm muscle joining and u might want to spend some time there. The bicep is made up of three muscles, forget their names, and one wraps over top the main one at the inside of the elbow joint which tends to push the inner elbow inward. looks as if the bicep comes directly into your forearm.

I"m not a master of human anatomy... just brain stormin with ya..

again, it's an great piece. The fact that we can spend time on such minnor details says alot for every other excellent asspect of your model.

-Chris

[Joe Gosselin]

Hi again
I'm finding your crits very helpful thanks again! I realize this is still under construction and your input and trhe ones of others are always welcome.
I'm happy with the proportion but I'm not finish tweakin it.I see what you mean about the hands and the muscle on the arms I really havent gone to deep yet in all the seperation of the anatomy but as soon as I'm done I will post it again for more crits
cheers
Joe

[Joe Gosselin]

Chris ... do you have any of your work displayed, I would like to check it out
joe

[cdinic]

had a site up... had problems with my host... in process of setting up a new one... I"ll let ya know when it's availible ;)

-Chris

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