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svenjorjensen

07-09-2007, 02:00 PM

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Title: ok, this is not the pretty render what every body want to see, but...
Name: jose carlos montero garcia
Country: España
Software: 3ds max

hello everybody, here is the last render inspired in the winter in santiago serie.the image is calculated with maxwell render. it show the final composition, wich is inspired in a real phooto. to me, was seriously important capture the light in the same way that it was in the photo, and reproducing the geometries most real as possible... i know it is not a pretty render, but this image has a lot of work and study ; i hope you like it.

matt-ksp

07-09-2007, 11:39 PM

very nice. my comment is on the sunlight. the photo looks to be morning, but the 3d looks a couple of hours earlier than that, the light is too warm.

....erm, sorry, thats the wrong way round.

svenjorjensen

07-09-2007, 11:50 PM

thanks KP_S, and ok, there are some important differences between the 2 images. the real photo was taken ( aprox.) about at 12,00 hours , the position of sun in the render is the corresponding to sun at 12,00 at this latitude, but is not precise work... it seem different , so i try to reproduce it... thanks for your comment

teemto

07-10-2007, 12:22 AM

which one is the photo again? ;>
good job

-tee

svenjorjensen

07-10-2007, 12:25 AM

jejeje thanks for the joke and the comment teemto¡¡¡

milannnnnnnn

07-10-2007, 01:45 AM

Great work! nice and detailed / shaders. I love your lighting and the
overall look... 2*

svenjorjensen

07-10-2007, 07:18 AM

thanks milad¡¡

arrow614

07-10-2007, 01:34 PM

Looks really good. The only crit I have is the texture on the main building looks kind of like burlap or canvas material and there are too many of the same curtains in the windows. Since that is the focus of the piece, the windows tend to catch your eye right away and the curtains look a little out of place. There is too much contrast in the windows, too dark where there is no curtains and too white where there is. Good job overall though!

svenjorjensen

07-10-2007, 03:43 PM

thanks a lot for your comment and critique, arrow, i´ll have it in mind... thanks¡¡

Lordstormdragon

07-10-2007, 08:03 PM

...that nobody mentioned it, but notice the glare of the sun off the top of your central building, in the photograph? It's entirely nonexistent in your CG version. I think adding that, even in postwork or Photoshop, would be a tremendous leap for you to realistic lighting.

svenjorjensen

07-10-2007, 09:50 PM

hello lordstorm,first thanks, and ok, there was a problem... in that moment i was a beginner in 3ds and photoshop. that work has been not post-produced from his creation, but i think like you, perhaps i should to work a little with photoshop an the image... thanks for your valuation...

Lordstormdragon

07-10-2007, 10:03 PM

...that I wasn't harsh, I mean it's a great image! Awesome reproduction, in my opinion.

svenjorjensen

07-10-2007, 10:14 PM

thank you man¡¡¡¡

Neox3d

07-16-2007, 11:49 AM

nice try though, looks good, agree with the other guys

svenjorjensen

07-16-2007, 01:52 PM

thank you for your comment neox¡¡¡

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