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TDP40oz
07-07-2007, 07:13 PM
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-7203354646575031846

Hey guys I'm trying to finish up my demo reel before I head out to SIGGRAPH this August. Any crits would be appreciated. Thanks!
KyleG
07-08-2007, 12:48 AM
The first thing that popped out to me was that your character is off balance in the walk cycle, see attached image, his plant foot is in front of his root while the other leg is lifted, if you were to try this yourself you would fall over.
TDP40oz
07-10-2007, 02:38 AM
Hey Kyle good call I didn't even notice that untill you pointed it out. I'm changing it up right now.

Thanks for the crit
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