Character: Cyber Rat

[Kirt]

That's a good looking rat. It'd probably look really nice as part of a logo or t-shirt print. Something rebellious and grungy. But on it's own it's not too complete.

It needs something to anchor it to a purpose. It's just a disconnected and floating rat. Nothing to get too excited about (which is probably why there is a lack of comments).

Technically speaking, I think you did a fine job on the render. The head looks more blurry than the rest of the body and I think the eye would look better with less glow - more definition. But other than that I really can't think of anything to critique.

Add something to it and post it again. I'd like to see what the purpose of the rat is.

[awesome pants]

I agree with kirt, the rat does need something behind him to bring it all together, great job, those claws are vicious

[JonasNoell]

Hmm ok guys you are right ;)

Main reason for doing the rat was to do it for some kind of logo, like Kirt already said it. I got the job to do an evil looking rat logo that's why I missed the background so far. But I personally will keep on working on it and especially the background. Stay tuned for the finished version then. And thanks for the comments :thumbsup:

cANt

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