View Full Version : Shuttle launch
AdrianoFerrari 03-23-2003, 04:41 PM I hope this link works now .
I am just starting out with 2D CG, so comments and criticisms are most welcome.
http://www24.brinkster.com/ferrari8/
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AdrianoFerrari
03-24-2003, 10:01 PM
Hmm... this one just went by without a single comment :hmm: . Well, I hope my next try will be worth some crits.
Zukum
03-25-2003, 12:16 AM
Looking good to me.
I think I would try to add a bit more shading in the pillar of smoke to define more volume. I think a bit more contrast on the ship itself would add to its realism. Like the way you have treated the reflection.
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9th Legion
04-23-2003, 09:30 AM
Heehee, very nice work!
I especially like the cartoony drawing in the shuttle pic. Too bad you disturbed the picture a bit with the 3D shuttle on top of the nice cartoony surroundings. Maybe you could try drawing the shuttle, or improve the textures, so it doens't look that frawless and shiny. No further comments :airguitar
Diablo™
04-23-2003, 09:34 AM
I like them, the second one espeically. I'm not sure about your last picture though, the soldier might need some extra details to look more finished.
Nice :)
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