CGTalk - character: old guy

lostanimator

03-23-2003, 03:55 PM

hey this is a character from my 1st animated short film..just finished texturing the head...
dudes plz.. tell me if there is anything needed to improve..as i dont want to compromize on my animation...and i'm working hard on it.. please have mercy on my age to as i'm just 19 yrs. old...

Max4d

03-23-2003, 04:40 PM

Hey dude

This looks very nice, he looks quit old :D:D:D. The rimples are maybe a bit to big, but that's just my opnion.
The ear is an excellent moddeling piece i have to admit, very nice. Keep it up, tweak a bit and then give him a nice texture.

BTW, you say you are just 19, well to be honest , that isn't to young. I am 17 years old and i know a lot that are even younger and post here. But still, you show talent and are definetly goping in the right direction.

Greetz Max4d

Wiz

03-23-2003, 05:43 PM

lol i can really relate.. i myself am 16 ,and just recenly modeled an old folk :) so i can give you some crit i got.. and by looking on some refernce..

ok first of very nice model very cool :) and very nice style..
ok now ,i think the eyes lack details..more wrinkels you got them everywhere but the eyes most important.. really makes one looks old..

erm lips looks good :) i think the little crease of the cheack that creats the mouth beak (err have no idea how its called) lacks some blobbiness as his skin will be very -fally-

same goes for the ears... make them more droppy :)

other than that great work !

runna

03-24-2003, 06:10 AM

It looks pretty cool!! I have to agree about the skin creases. The actual skin texture works pretty well though, with an almost translucent look.

Andrew

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