Modeling Texturing Reel

[Booyah]

you have some really nice work i could definetly see these characters in a videogame. I think it would be cool if you started your reel with the animation of the guy putting on his vest and cocking his gun and putting all his weapons on. I think that would be an interesting intro and get peoples attention. With that said i think you spent a little too much time on the first guy, all your models look real good, it seemed like the first one dragged on a little too much compared to how long the other ones were on the screen. I would do it more like you did with the rest of your models keep it short and sweet and leave people wanting to see a little more.:thumbsup:

[farazmobin]

you have some really nice work i could definetly see these characters in a videogame. I think it would be cool if you started your reel with the animation of the guy putting on his vest and cocking his gun and putting all his weapons on. I think that would be an interesting intro and get peoples attention. With that said i think you spent a little too much time on the first guy, all your models look real good, it seemed like the first one dragged on a little too much compared to how long the other ones were on the screen. I would do it more like you did with the rest of your models keep it short and sweet and leave people wanting to see a little more.:thumbsup:

thanx Booyah...i too think that the first one stretches a bit longer than the others ..specially the spins...but i spent a month to find a good music track to match the animations...i even cut out alot of audio...so that i can get quickly to the part where he loads up..but thats the best i could get :(

[Roy192]

wow..nice show,love the commando character loadup scene. what software did you use?

[ArtZealot]

Very Nice modelling stuff u got there !!! I specially liked the weopens u made , but the only thing I found a little to crit about is the "Lower Triceps " For me I think it should not be like that , But anyways nice reel u have got !!!

Best of luck !!!

[windarr]

Great reel and website, I would agree that the first character is shown for maybe just a little long, but it's a minor complaint. Only real thing of note I saw was that the tricep on the 1st character isn't modeled correctly, see this photo to see what I mean:

http://www.etricep.com/images/cattris.jpg

Otherwise great work, and love your style/presentation.

[farazmobin]

thanx man...yea i know the tricep problem...i realized this very late into the production as there about 30 morphs for the biceps in different positon...changing it would take me a lot time and problem...and in that pic the tricep only looks that way if you stress the tricep muscles.took me a hell a lot of time to set up morphs for every possible possiton of his arm,

anyway this is was my first reel,....i put it up on cgtalk to get suggestion...i have already started working on the newversion of the first character,and this time im looking in some cgmuscle tools

thanx again on all the suggestions

[Tyros]

I like the models......



but is missing texture work, dirt up things.....

[windarr]

Well it's a great reel nonetheless, hope it lands you a great job.:thumbsup:

[sonusunny]

Hey!

Great modelling and texturing work , good luck with your job hunt.

Sonusunny

[Parviz]

its really good show reel keep it up. i like ur presentation.

The link below is my Texturing showreel.i need ur suggesions.

www.zshare.net/download/2486544403a34d/ (http://www.zshare.net/download/2486544403a34d/)

[Roy192]

hey ..i just luv the skinmorph animation stuff you did for his biceps and other parts on his body...can you give me tutorials..i have found some turorials on 3ds max website but havent got lucky with my project!

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