female form

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http://www.grafisktforum.org/attachment.php?s=&postid=108494

[Elliotjnewman]

You really need to get some reference pictures before you start modelling. Go to www.fineart.sk - I think thats the address.

At the moment the form really isn't right. If you post a wireframe then I will be able to see how you constucted it. It looks to me like you have produced this within a short time period, in actuality you should spend days working on something like this - its one of the hardest things to re-create, more detail needs to be added such as underlining bone structures showing through and muscles - all of which will need reference material to achieve good results.

Hang in there - we have all been there - everyone needs to start somewhere, just spend more time on it and keep posting updates and it will come together eventually!

Ell.

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www.fineart.sk <- wrong adress :/

I´ll view wire (top,front,left,perspective)

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front

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left

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perspective

[Elliotjnewman]

Well that address should be right, there server must be down at the moment.
I have looked at the wire frame of the pictures and they prove my point - there hasnt been enough time spent on the modelling. There is no flow to the topology - you have just pulled at vertices without taking into consideration the way the wireframe flows. If you do a search on the finished work gallery here for 'woman, or girl, or human' and go through the results there should be quite a few examples there of how to model with detail. I recommend doing a search for 'Stahlberg' who is an excellent artist with work focused on the female form.

Hope this helps, ell.

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