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Dampire 03-23-2003, 10:23 AM Hello I just want some C&C because I'm "stuck"
(is that the correct word?) ok
this is my first SKIN draw and its a WIP
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dmcgrath
03-23-2003, 09:21 PM
The colors are good, but I'm not getting much sense of the anatomy there. Are you using a picture for refrence? Could you post that so we can compare the two? The other two things I can recommend is never paint on a white background. Try to at least make a flat color background to paint over, preferably on a different layer (if you use P-shop). I just picked a random soft color. Also the knee placement looks too close, amking the legs very short. And I like the right side hip area, but the left side is too much the same, maybe some variation would look better.
yobarman
03-23-2003, 10:06 PM
it's pretty nice but the bottom half needs a lot of work. this girl has one flat ass. it looks like she's 2d and her bottom half was folded up like a peice of paper. the bottom half is way too short and flat, that's all i can say. i really wouldn't know how to fix it, but keep working on it :p
dmcgrath
03-24-2003, 12:59 AM
That's why I think there was a picture involved in the making of this thing. Her butt doesn't look flat, it looks like there should be a sheet or a towel covering up most of it.
Dampire
03-24-2003, 05:43 AM
aaa!!! ok .. I use a picture for reference but is just side to side I don't use layer and paint over..
ok all your C&C really help me I keep working on.. mmm do you want to see the picture of reference but how can I upload it?? ... i just have a geocities acount.
mm ??? just tell me how and I upload it and you keep helping me.. jaja
and sorry for my Inglish but it is really hard to write it ja
thanks alot .. really keep helping me ok?
P L E A S E
dmcgrath
03-24-2003, 10:04 PM
That is okay, my spanish is worse than your english, I am sure.
You can post the picture here but you have to make it small enough to be under 20k. Just resize it smaller if you have to. And then attach it here. Even a small picture will help us. Or if you got if off the internet before, you could give us the link to the picture.
Dampire
03-24-2003, 10:56 PM
mmm ok here is the picture of mm a "friend" ok I dont really know what is she but ok.. here is..
hope it can be uploaded.. here it goes
megra
03-25-2003, 10:04 PM
add some wrinkles and shadows to the area below her bottom, to show that she's sitting/sinking into cloth. you did an excellent job of mimicing the photo. i suppose the color differences were on purpose?
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