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mixmastermike

07-06-2007, 09:07 AM

http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/266627/266627_1183712841_medium.jpg

Title: Space Marine
Name: Mike Olsen
Country: USA
Software: Maya, Photoshop, ZBrush

This is the final render for my Production Modeling class here at Full Sail. The concept is based off of the main character of the Doom game series. I only got a month to work on it so there are some things i will be working on to improve it.

aesis412

07-07-2007, 06:43 AM

nice looking model man, the only thing ill say is, that the spec on the pipes is a little to much considering the wear and tear on them but overrall i think its nice man keep working at it.

jojoba007

07-07-2007, 09:00 AM

Hi,

Nice start, although I think that the lightning and overal composition needs some
more tweeking.

Maverynthia

07-10-2007, 11:59 PM

I think the chin could use some work. It looks too flat, it should dip in under the lip and the come out and forward. The jaw also doesn't go stright back into the ear it comes down a little before going and then sweeps forward. Also for the blood on the armor it looks a bit too bright as if it were on a whilte background. Since it's red on green it'd be a bit darker in color.

I think the texturing on the face is really good and I like the added detail of the ear piece. His eyes are the part I like best. A nice piercing stare.

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