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cewolf
03-23-2003, 08:40 AM
hi there evrey one



what do you think of my last work ....


where do you think it need more work

what do you think this work needs more


thanks for every opnion

done by max 4.2 surface tool

thanks to all
http://www.arab3.com/upload/images/Mar03/cewolf_maclaren6.jpg


http://www.arab3.com/upload/images/Mar03/cewolf_maclaren4.jpg


http://www.arab3.com/upload/images/Mar03/cewolf_maclaren1.jpg


http://www.arab3.com/upload/images/Mar03/cewolf_maclaren3.jpg

http://www.arab3.com/upload/images/Mar03/cewolf_5.jpg










cewolf

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nalhcal
03-23-2003, 09:23 AM
Sorry, I can't see it. :(
Stimpy
03-23-2003, 12:44 PM
modelling looks good as far as i can see.
you should work on the materials though and on the presention of your pictures.

right now it looks as if the whole thingy is made out of chrome, including the windows.

get yourself some plane, so the car can cast a nice shadow, and tweak that car paint some more.

nice job on the modelling tho
Ti-Ki
03-23-2003, 01:03 PM
too much reflexion !:surprised

As Stimpy already said the car seems to fly in a sort of white space, and look at the reel car pictures for the camera angle and placement...

The modeling is ok for me :)
seed
03-23-2003, 01:25 PM
cool modeling:rolleyes:
JimRayden
03-23-2003, 01:41 PM
Cool model!!!

1 thing to crit though: The wheels need more detail.
Then put your car on a street-photo and show the pic to your friends and tell them that you bought a car :D



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Jim :airguitar
ja3d
03-23-2003, 02:06 PM
Good modeling, but I think you must work more in textures of wheels and for the car, use fresnel reflections give you better results, I think, and decrease reflection level.

Good work.
Daniel
03-23-2003, 02:58 PM
Looks like a mclaren f1.
Looks like a WIP
and the Mirrors are ugly, much to wide and box.

my opinion!
Cya.
nek11man
03-23-2003, 07:53 PM
Very nice, just make the wheels more detail mayb adding breakdisk or put some bolts on it. I think the mirror is fine for sports car, they do have bigger mirrors compare to normal cars.

Good job. :thumbsup:
cewolf
03-23-2003, 09:30 PM
thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks
thanks thanks thanks ....... for all of you for your opinios

i will keep it in mind

i thought it was a finished work but now seems to be a WIP

thanks again


cewolf:bounce: :bounce:
nalhcal
03-23-2003, 09:47 PM
I think that the car wouldn't look too shiny if it was in an environment with random black and white boxes to show off the car material.
Psycholink
03-23-2003, 10:34 PM
Very cool !
sniper-x
03-24-2003, 08:17 PM
NICE.....but it aint a true McLaren f1 the front bumper isnt right and it is toooooooooooooooo shiny re-do one wit less reflection
dandavis
03-24-2003, 09:45 PM
I dunno, I kinda like it just the way it is. Excellent model! :applause: :thumbsup:
John Lee
03-24-2003, 11:23 PM
very nice but i think you need to sort out the reflections on the windows? I like it
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