CGTalk - the orintal wind

AxelAlonso

07-04-2007, 09:47 AM

all right I am planing on finish this illustration before the end of July, and its about a story book, this character is a godees of the golden wind she can'nt touch the land if so she will turn into a bird with out voice, so she only appeares on top of flowers over water were the elements convine, shes use the sound to make powerfull spells so live wit out music and sound its not in her nature.the palace in the BG its were she used to live, and some times visits.

Playinsincepong

07-05-2007, 03:37 AM

Hey,

This beautiful start and a wonderful concept...very poetic. Could you please post a larger image as it's kind of hard to get a read on whats going on tonally and drawing issues.

Thanks,

playinsincepong(Jeff)

AxelAlonso

07-05-2007, 06:44 AM

Thanks Jeff,
For the nice words, I will gladly post a biger image but I cant understand quit well how to make the pos,t for bigger images here ? so I will post mean time small thunbails..

Playinsincepong

07-05-2007, 10:38 AM

Man i'm tired, but i wanted to see if i could help with your image so i did a paint over I hope you don't mind, but here's just one lighting scheme that I thought was interesting. I hope it helps to generate some ideas :)http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j150/playinsincepong/bgGeisha01cpaintover.jpg

nerdyninja

07-05-2007, 09:50 PM

I think this drawing is looking pretty good. I like the idea of the drawover. Ummm my critique is the ground looks too blurry and it makes her look like she is kind of floating there and not really rooted to the ground. Maybe add more shadows and a shadow for her as well...

AxelAlonso

07-05-2007, 10:44 PM

Jeff,
Thanks a lot I like de idea of the lighting defiantly, that source of light its going to happen so I can also emulate better golden rays, to give a better oriental look, I was also thinking on add some golden fishes in the water. I will def post a progress today.And thanks for the time I dont mind at alll!

Celine,
Thanks a lot for the feed back its great help, I agree the water for the floor looks bad , I have been a bit upset since my reflection change every time, I add some other elements and I wasn’t sure if I was going to ad some fog over the water to give the idea of morning spring, and a better atmosphere, and she will be on top of a water lily, so thats why I have'nt add that element yet I will today though.

AxelAlonso

07-09-2007, 03:02 AM

HI guys, sorry about not posting before but I got lots of homework..I am going to upload bigger images in a link in case its not easy to see the details on the atachments...this is the desgn of the geisha .http://www.geocities.com/axelealonso/Axel-Geisha.jpg

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