Strange Behavior (Illustration) Entry: taole chen

[shapemaster]

oops, double post ...
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[shapemaster]

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Hi! this my first challenge and i already messed up completely (forgot i entered the challenge). well, i hope there is still enough time left.

description: in a world where everything is observed by the state, people all do the same in order to avoid attention. even the slightest difference stands out.

[easydoesit]

I like the idea but its not coming across yet. You could be talking about guys at work or fashion or anything at this point.

Try to get the police state Visuals into this image. Big Brother watching..., Protest riots, Tanks or whatever will enhance the concept.

The difference in the red tie guy vrs all the other people is subtle and will work great if you add more elements that support your idea.

[shapemaster]

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i added two helicopters transporting swat teams, i also tried to make the main figure more colorful than the others. what do ya think? i need some opinions on this please.

[shapemaster]

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i think i ended in a dead-end here.
the concept isn't all too bad, but the conversion is a failure.
I'll look for something else, or convince me otherwise. ;)

[Ferx]

Hey Shapemaster, nice sketchs and nice idea ! :thumbsup: I think your concept is more like a "rebel" behavior, but strange for sure :D Good luck ! and following the evolution of your concepts! :)

[unf0rg1v3n]

hey shapemaster. Your piece is looking good but if i hadnt read the description it wouldnt have been that clear to me what the concept was. Maybe making the difference between the "norm" and the "standout" would really dramatize the piece as a whole. Keep on it man, cause itll definitely come together and look good in the end!

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