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sandykoufax
07-02-2007, 02:20 PM
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Title: Still Life on afternoon
Name: Jeong-ho Kim
Country: South Korea
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop

Hi, friends.

It is my old scene which is not my desing.
I just remake the reference photo at my desired style.
Original reference photo is included a company's catalogue.
I made this with 3dsmax and photoshop and maxwell render.
C&C welcome.
JH.Kim



I've changed with newer one.
MaryamNademi
07-02-2007, 05:21 PM
Hey Geong,although i am a very fan of your super renders.
but in this one i think you should work more on the window textures & shoes leather.
By the way,the suitcases are awesome & the books are lovely.

Keep Rocking.:thumbsup:
DrZenith
07-02-2007, 05:52 PM
Good work. I like the image, but I think the lighting needs to be reworked a little...It seems very harsh. It looks like bright sunlight, and yet there is very little (possibly none) bouncing of the light. Try turning up the strength of the bounces. I might be wrong, and it may look exactly like the reference photo, but it just doesn't look fully convincing as a CG image.

The modelling is good though, and you've gone into a lot of detail. I really like your work on the books. They're deformed perfectly. :)
xindgi
07-03-2007, 06:04 AM
man u have done a great job. but the texture & rendering should improve your Garden cortile is a great job with good rendering.

may i know your system specification.
sandykoufax
07-03-2007, 03:52 PM
newer version.
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/3949/romanshade152lj7.jpg


Thanks for the reply, friends.

My system is xeon x3210, 2gb ram, x800gto
DrZenith
07-03-2007, 04:24 PM
That's more like it :)

With the updated lighting it looks a lot more convincing. We can now believe that bright sunlight is coming through the windows, and it also allows the viewer to see more detail in the scene. Good update.
xindgi
07-04-2007, 06:36 AM
I believe that everything can improve ever. because things changes with time. Now its really much better.
nice work and kep it up sandykoufax.
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