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ThunderTurtle
03-22-2003, 03:46 AM
This is an assignment for my Camera and Lighting class. Model, Texure, and light a scene from one of the photos we were given. It was supossed to be photorealistic, but we were allowed freedom with the scene, so the original isnt as important as the final product.

Feel free to crit on anything that looks out of place or that would help the scene. Thanks guys.

View
http://www.vi2.com/getFile/119891.jpg

Another View
http://www.vi2.com/getFile/119889.jpg

-Travis
dark_lotus
03-22-2003, 04:29 AM
That looks amazing! Great Stuff, the only thing that looks out of place are the edges, but it does look like a really clear photograph.

Awesome!
ThunderTurtle
03-22-2003, 05:31 AM
Thanks for the reply. I wasnt really concerned with the streaching on the far edges of it. I'll render one out from a stright from view in a little bit where the edges are hidden.

-Travis
BiTMAP
03-22-2003, 09:58 AM
wateR?
PureFire
03-22-2003, 01:33 PM
very nice...it just seems like the stairs are shiny?

Also if I would make the bricks a tad darker...just my preference :D

great job!!
ThunderTurtle
03-22-2003, 10:08 PM
Here are a few more views.

closeup:
http://www.vi2.com/getFile/120186.jpg

another:
http://www.vi2.com/getFile/120188.jpg

-Travis
wedge
03-22-2003, 10:10 PM
the platform texture is too low resolution, but other than that it looks pretty good. you might want to detail the railings, the windows, and the barrels, and not rely on textures so much.
Ti-Ki
03-22-2003, 10:20 PM
Nice.
Maybe more dirt on the corners for exemple and it's perfect.:)
and the water effect is a little weird too. I thought it was sand or something muddish (? :shrug: ) first time.
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