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rybread
06-29-2007, 09:22 AM
Whats up everybody! Just finished up Class 1, basic foundations, of Animation Mentor and wanted to post my progress for some crit. Its been an amazing experience so far and i cant wait to start Class 2. Thanks for any comments!

http://www.vimeo.com/225026
(http://http://www.vimeo.com/225026)
mamat
06-29-2007, 10:07 AM
wow!great! i love the dance at the start!!
good work:thumbsup:
GoldenCamel
06-29-2007, 02:42 PM
The best AM reel I've seen so far!

That being said, the dance would need more weight, it was a bit floaty and also needed more contrast in timing.

Also, the poses weren't as good as the animation, i'd suggest you spend some more time on your posing skills.

good luck
Banshax
06-29-2007, 03:05 PM
Hiya Ryan,

Nice going man, very nice. I`ll be keeping an eye on your work during Class2 man :]
Reflexx
06-29-2007, 04:42 PM
Great work. I like the first walk a lot.

I thought the pose where the guy is leaning on the bar looked slightly awkward, but I'm not experienced enough yet to tell you why.
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