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SherifSa
06-28-2007, 10:52 AM
Sherif Salama is entered in the "Strange Behavior Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/strange_behavior/view_entries.php?challenger=12989)

Latest Update: Rough Storyboards or 3D pre-visualization: The Elephant Guy
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1188714965_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=4624302#post4624302)

SherifSa
06-30-2007, 05:11 PM
First, i wish you all best luck,
And here is what i've done in the past two days,
well i decided to begin with modeling all the characters first, so i began with the dragon,

So, here is the lowres dragon and a smoothed one with fast sss mr shader:

http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/708/dragloresfinalpw8.th.jpg (http://img158.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dragloresfinalpw8.jpg)

http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/8335/dragonrenderedkw6.th.jpg (http://img520.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dragonrenderedkw6.jpg)

http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/1433/dragonrendered3fv1.th.jpg (http://img520.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dragonrendered3fv1.jpg)

SherifSa
07-10-2007, 01:28 PM
So i'm continuing to model the characters, the models are still rough, they still need a lot of work, but here is what i've done so far..

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/8755/johnffo7.th.jpg (http://img267.imageshack.us/my.php?image=johnffo7.jpg)

So, tell me your opinions about John before i go any deeper...

bstout
07-10-2007, 05:21 PM
the dragon looks good. can't say anything about z-brush cuz i don't go there (yet...)
the fat guy also looks good. the jowels give him a lot of character.

you will get more C and C if you use the uploader to post your WIP.
to do that...

so go to the challenge page where you went to enter.
click where it says submit entry.

or click here
http://features.cgsociety.org/chall...ubmit_entry.php (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/strange_behavior/submit_entry.php)

scroll down to the bottom, sign in and upload your images.
i believe jpg is the recommended format, they must be less than 150 Kb.


good luck.

SherifSa
07-11-2007, 01:37 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1184114236_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1184114236_large.jpg)

John (Still in progress)

ps: Bstout thanks for the advice, good luck ;)

SherifSa
07-16-2007, 07:28 PM
Hey guys, i have a little animation about John that i wanna show you,
but i don't know how to upload videos, is this possible, if so can any1 help??
thanks..

bstout
07-16-2007, 08:00 PM
i believe you have touse teh challenge uploader.
you can download it from the bottom of the submit entry page.
ypu'll probably have to read teh directions to figure out proper format and stuff.

can't help more as i haven't gotten there myself yet...

hv
07-19-2007, 02:11 AM
Looking good, especially your model for John. I'll return to check for updates.

SteveTsang
07-19-2007, 01:13 PM
Hey Sherif,

Liking the look of your John, almost got a bit of a Shriek look there, is your character going to be set in any particular time period?

Waiting to see more!

Good luck!

SherifSa
07-19-2007, 01:31 PM
Yea, the jacket is a little bit inspired from shrek,
i'm working on Amy now and i'm almostly finished with john.

Steve: i really like your sketches, and i love the idea of the 7 sins, really good..
Henrik: you are doing very good too, great storyborads, great progress till now..

really can't wait to see more of you guys, good luck ;)

SherifSa
07-19-2007, 03:06 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1184854012_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1184854012_large.jpg)

This is a very rough idea about the Amy character, i made her tall and thin so she is the opposite of john, which makes contrast between the two characters.

bake3d
07-19-2007, 05:10 PM
cool characters ** - I like the orc shrek guy. but the style is different on amy. you should make them both orc's and maybe give amy some under arm hair. and a beard.

hv
07-20-2007, 12:48 AM
Interesting constrast of shapes!

aqua9
07-20-2007, 05:52 AM
really cool models ............ liked all of them :)

bstout
07-20-2007, 11:50 PM
i like the contrast of the super thin and the hefty size in the characters.

one thing about amy.
it looks like to lengthen her legs you popped the boots on so the tops are just at her ankles are. i think it might improve what you are going for if you raise the boot up just a little, maybe just the top, not the sole, or scale up her whole leg on the y axis (maya's y axis that is) so that the leg is longer and the ankle is hidden. i think it would help you achieve what you are going for. just my opinion though.

good luck.

SherifSa
07-31-2007, 12:20 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1185837637_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1185837637_large.jpg)

This is Amy with few more tweaks,
thanks you all for your support, the boots are fixed, added hair, and more soon. ;)

SherifSa
07-31-2007, 12:24 AM
I was having troubles with my computer, but i've fixed it now, that what was taking me so long, but hopefully you'll see my work a little bit faster now ;)

SherifSa
07-31-2007, 01:47 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1185886057_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1185886057_large.jpg)

This Amy with few more tweaks, i played a little bit with the shaders, i'm almostley done with her...
so, tell me what you think about it..

bake3d
08-01-2007, 05:56 AM
AHA dude your awesome~! you went with my armpit hair, beard idea wooo!

SherifSa
08-01-2007, 02:57 PM
yea, i loved your idea, thanks m8 ;)

SherifSa
08-01-2007, 11:43 PM
Hey, why didn't any1 tell me what he thinks about Amy, is she good or bad, please don't hesitate to tell me your opinion, this will reaaly help me..thank u

bake3d
08-02-2007, 01:05 AM
haha this amy rules~! :thumbsup:

SherifSa
08-03-2007, 11:51 PM
Curently i'm rigging the characters, and i'm almostley done with the dragon..you'll see my work in couple of dayz...
just wanted to tell you what am i doin now ;)

hv
08-06-2007, 05:45 PM
Hey, why didn't any1 tell me what he thinks about Amy, is she good or bad, please don't hesitate to tell me your opinion, this will reaaly help me..thank u

Well, she looks ugly. If you mean her to be ugly, it's working :)

Have you described your adaptation? Maybe we can understand better your design choices if you give us an idea how your story is like.

Good luck.

SherifSa
08-08-2007, 08:26 PM
Well, she looks ugly. If you mean her to be ugly, it's working :)

Have you described your adaptation? Maybe we can understand better your design choices if you give us an idea how your story is like.

Good luck.

well, i can't understand you liked it or not, but thanks anyway..
i didn't make a lot of adaptation until now, but i'm trying to make strange characters, cuz the contest is about STRANGE BEHAVIOUR..

bake3d
08-09-2007, 11:47 AM
I have hairy amy set as my desktop

SherifSa
08-09-2007, 04:16 PM
I have hairy amy set as my desktop

Glad to hear this ;)

bake3d
08-12-2007, 07:53 PM
Dude you should totally put armpit hair on the dragon

SherifSa
08-22-2007, 01:08 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1187741332_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1187741332_large.jpg)

this is the hot girl from the last art picture, she is still in progress, don't worry about the bad deformations cuz this was a temp rig only, i'm still working on the shaders and the hair...

SherifSa
08-27-2007, 02:00 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1188219624_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1188219624_large.jpg)

This is the art gallery, I gave it the look of a haunted house, those weired things can't happen in an ordinary art gallery..

SherifSa
08-29-2007, 02:56 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1188352596_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1188352596_large.jpg)

This is the art galley from outside with few more tweaks..
please tell me what you think about it, and if you have any ideas please tell me..

SherifSa
08-30-2007, 01:49 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1188434996_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1188434996_large.jpg)

Software: Maya

this is a quick playblast with a test character, (i'll replace him with john)
the character is roughly animated, and then i'v added a lattice deformer to him to make this sucking effect, for the painting, i've used softbodies with goal and springs, and by the way this effect was inspired from a dynamics dvd from thegnomonworkshop by alex alvarez (softbodie effects)...thought i should mention this...

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/strange_behavior/player.php?entry_id=81178)

MohseNHoseinali
08-31-2007, 08:08 PM
Hi,
All of your characters are good, I hope to see you in runner ups :thumbsup:

SherifSa
09-02-2007, 07:36 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1188714965_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/17/12989/12989_1188714965_large.jpg)

this s the elephant man from the first painting, hope you like it...

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