Strange Behavior (Illustration) Entry: Dang Kian Sang

[toribird]

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Participates once more CG Challenge!!I'm feels extremely happily^^ But this time wasted many time to plan the concept,because bustled to cause to tow many time to complete it.The story is about an eagle with ninja have a complex relationship.Next time will be clear describes the story content. Thanks

[Gord-MacDonald]

Nice drawing - good luck with the challenge!


Gord

[dinodog-jr]

yo nice to see u again. Toribird..

Great to see u can drawing a much more mature & stronger character.

Let's learn together in this challenge .

[toribird]

Gord-MacDonald - thanks ur support, wish u luck and enjoy this challenge ^^

dinodog78 - haha, very happy see u again too ^^ Last time I miss the challenge, so hope this time have more time to do it.
btw thanks ur reply again XD
Let's effort together for this challenge ^^ Go!Go!Go!!

[toribird]

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The story is about ninja and eagle have a complex relationship happening in 21st century.Ninja when some mission because kill eagle's master. The eagle loses the master therefore extremely hates to ninja.When it seizes the chance of disturb ninja doing mission to help died the master revenges.But it has been seriously injured in an among disturbance motion.Not only but ninja has not injured the eagle, moreover also helps it to treat!The eagle knew oneself mistakenly...from this time on the eagle no longer disturbs ninja doing mission, only silently hides behind following ninja...
Sorry my bad english, hope all of u can understand.Thanks^^

[killer-instinct93]

It's an interesting concept, but nothing in the picture cuurently even hints at the story you have behind it, nor is there anything especially strange about the image.

As for the current image, I think you really need to work on both the perspective and proportions. And I know it looks cool to have a giant moon behind a character, but its very unrealistic to make the moon that low and that huge. The only time of day it would be that low is before sunset when you can't see it.

[toribird]

killer-instinct93 - thank ur suggestion, but the moon problem because i want make the image more fantastic feel,therefore i'm not follow the correct size.

[toribird]

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Correct a bit the proportions and layout.

[Ferx]

Hey Toribird, nice sketch !! and really conceptual idea :thumbsup: I think your character need a more action pose, as if it was on the verge of jumping and flying, in an eagle attitude, only a comment :) again nice work and good luck !! keep the good work.

[toribird]

Ferx - thanks ur reply , wish u luck and enjoy this challenge ^^

[toribird]

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Long time no update already, because i'm stop a while to do other thing ><...but during this time i still keep continue to research about the reference, color mood.
This time i using the technical has changed a little, cause hope can more improve my artwork.So far the deadline left 1 month + only,hope can faster done this challenge.

[dinodog-jr]

dat's a very good coloring. It bring life to the b&w sketches alot.

You are doing a very fine painting here.

Good handsome face.

[Versiden]

nice progress so far, but nothing in the image tells any story about it without having to read your description. I don't see any relationship with the characters.

[toribird]

dinodog78 - thanks ur reply again^^ how about u?? Still not yet start this challenge?! take care~

Versiden - thanks ur suggestion and reply .

[toribird]

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more color , lighting and details .

[dinodog-jr]

haha..paiseh so alot man.

I was planning alot of things inside my head. Whether to go for sci-fi, fantasy, kiddy theme?
then thinking whether a complex or simple scene.

too many thoughts makes me stuck inside brain..

I was "started" but not yet starting to paint anything.

I will follow you.

Gambahteh to you & me.hee...

[toribird]

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Starts to color the background , but the character aspect also needs to final touch up. Therefore the overall color already appeared, so hope it can be completed as soon as possible.Until now left 28days, wish all challenger more efforts^^

[toribird]

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my illustration will finish soon^^
Luckily this time still left much time to modify perfectly(cause last time always done at last minute >< ).

[toribird]

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Finally i done it!! thanks cg society^^

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