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BatmanFX
03-21-2003, 05:23 AM
Hey everybody. This is an animation I did that's going to be played at the Miami Orange Bowl durring an event called Relevo Por La Vida, Relay for Life.
Please give me some good crits, the final product is due tuesday. Its supposed to be a cross between Samurai Jack editing style and a spanish soap opera. The story is a man proposing to a girl when his wife breaks down the door and kicks some ass, typical soap opera stuff. The ending says something along the lines of "He couldnt see that comming, but he could save his life with early detection." Thats a really bad translation that is probably really far from what it says, but its about getting yourself tested for cancer.

http://urban.artistictrinity.com/comp.avi :beer:

seigi009
03-23-2003, 06:24 AM
it seems pretty crude, with the blocks and all. and the lighting needs work. it's hard to understand what the pink girl is doing after she gets the ring. but the editing is good and story is funny. it did have my atention the whole time.
when i watched i noticed there was no sound, it could have been me and my silly computer though. if there isn't, sound and music would help alot.
sorry to throw this on you right before it's due. good luck! i'm sure it'll work out for ya

iBlue
03-23-2003, 06:56 AM
looks iteresting, might look better with real models and not test ones (if they are test models) but prolly my only real problem is i dont understand whats happening.... prolly cuz the punchline is in french. :hmm:

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