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victorres1978
06-26-2007, 07:44 AM
victor torres is entered in the "Strange Behavior Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/strange_behavior/view_entries.php?challenger=12784)

Latest Update: Final Image: colo and digtal grading
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1185889924_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=4557074#post4557074)

victorres1978
06-27-2007, 01:13 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1182906805_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1182906805_large.jpg)

this is the first 3d previsualization of my work

is in lightwave 3d

behzad
06-27-2007, 07:23 PM
I can relate to this.

victorres1978
06-28-2007, 08:58 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1183064290_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1183064290_large.jpg)

new image head and body fro my psycho rabbit

victorres1978
07-04-2007, 11:23 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1183591413_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1183591413_large.jpg)

i include i new character in my scene

victorres1978
07-05-2007, 11:14 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1183677282_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1183677282_large.jpg)

new image with illumination and part of the textures

zweiDee
07-06-2007, 03:08 PM
hey

cool rabbit, i like it a lot, but i think the dogs body its to slym and the feets looks like feets from a cow. and i think the dog needs more muscle.
looking forward for great updates.
cheers

Kei-Acedera
07-06-2007, 03:53 PM
looking awesome! I like the dog and the bunny's expression is funny!

victorres1978
07-14-2007, 12:16 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1184372201_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1184372201_large.jpg)

a new image with more texture

renttu
07-14-2007, 05:11 AM
Great progress. Some fur or something to both rabbit and dog and they will look nicer, I think. Poses could be something like in rodeo. But, still great progress and nice to see all those WIP images.

mim-Armand
07-14-2007, 04:19 PM
Nice progress so far Victor, I like rabbit too!
Btw I'm agree with zweiDee, thought dog feets need more work yet, I'll suggest to use some photo ref to undrestanding true anatomy of dog's feet,
Anyway really good work, keep it up man! ;)

Goodluck, mim, :thumbsup:

victorres1978
07-17-2007, 10:16 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1184710587_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1184710587_large.jpg)

more details and new textures

victorres1978
07-24-2007, 12:49 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1185238159_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1185238159_large.jpg)

this is a new image with fur in the dog

victorres1978
07-24-2007, 06:55 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1185303354_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1185303354_large.jpg)

i put fur in the rabbit apply vignette
and make some changes in the lights

victorres1978
07-31-2007, 01:52 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1185889924_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12784/12784_1185889924_large.jpg)

this is my final image!!!!

walrus
07-31-2007, 03:08 PM
Nice work so far. The lighting behind the rabbit is so dark that he really gets lost against that dark backdrop. Look at your thumbnail image that shows up in teh forum: You can see the dog easily because there is a "halo" of light from the walls around him. You might want to try something similar so that the rabbit doesn't blend in with the background. I know you thought you were finished, but you still have 3 months left to make the image better, and improving the lighting so that the mian character is visible might qualify... :)

Also, might be nice to do somethign more with the rabbit's arm(s.) In all your other posts, I'd just assumed that was the rabbits' "T-pose" for modeling, and that you would get around to rigging and posing his arm later. It still looks like it hasn't been posed. Perhaps something more upraised?

Good luck!

renttu
08-01-2007, 05:02 AM
I agree with walrus that the "T-pose" of the rabbit isn't good. I suggest that you change the rabbit so that it looks to the camera and shows his middle finger :). Then it might look more crazy than now.

Materials looks good and lightning has been improving between your WIP images nicely. :thumbsup:

But you have still plenty of time, so you can have a break now and do finishing touches after couple of weeks or so.

Ferx
08-01-2007, 08:28 AM
Hola Victor. Nice image and models. I like your characters :thumbsup:
I Agree with Walrus and Renntu. You have more time to experiment with new poses for the psycho rabbit :grin: and camera positions, and lighting. Suerte !!

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