vehicle: Mini Cooper (classic)

[bigbad]

No crit here. Maybe the wheels need some kind of bump. Other than that it´s perfect.

Take a picture and ad the car in it. That whould be cool.

[ja3d]

The model looks very realistic, wonderfull replicate of mini cooper.

The mini looks better if put it with a background, in a parking for example.

Congratulations, good work :thumbsup:

[oryan]

Thanks

the wheels are my weak point, I am working, fixing this problem

[hawksworld]

Nice realism, but model needs more work. I'm critting 'cos I'm a mini enthusiast and build them for a hobby. Bonnet curves to far, roof is to tall. See attached pic (my car).

[Syrogen]

great job man! looks great from here

[wurp]

very nice model there, my critique is that the rendering seems a bit dull, it lacks bright highlights.

[oryan]

other view
]http://www.adedo.cl/rafa/3.jpg



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[oryan]

update

http://www.adedo.cl/rafa/2.jpg



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[oryan]

update

http://www.adedo.cl/rafa/4.jpg



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[snowMAN723]

Nice work. Did you use a tutorial. Because this is very similar to a tut Ive seen at 3dtotal.com

[oryan]

hi

I did´nt use a tutorial


The technique that uses is surface subdivision bases to polygons on 3dsmax

[alexis]

hi how did u make that color that looks like real paint?

[ai_jai]

Hi Oryan,

This is seriously good work man! :thumbsup:

I think the tyres look a bit plastic though (if i dare crit something thats WAAAYYYYY beyond my capabilities!)

But even so, its still brilliant work. how detailed is the underneath of it? and if this is a wip, then what is left to do!?!?

[mastering3d]

Its a very good model...But not 100% right the roof is wrong at the front ...The crome light holeders R wrong shape..And you dont have the joiner down the A post by the window screen and down the wings ...But other then a good start...

How I know well I am makeing one my self right now and done a
of looking around at mini coopers and download a alot of pics and blueprints..And the guy next door as one so it not that hard to see that there is some thing not right about yours...Sorry m8...But as I was saying its a very good model...

But there may of been all kinds of model of mini coopers over the years I am not to sure about that...And this shape may be just one that I have not yet seen..What would the year be for the one any idea...

[jcjimenez]

Very nice! but try to make some better reflections in the materials. I mean that re-render the scene with some environment.

"There is no good reflective materials (metals, ceramics), there are good environments for the materials to reflect them"

(Anonymous) :)

[Aeroplane]

wow,nice car!:thumbsup:

[PureFire]

looks pretty good but if you have ever owned a mini you will know that the roof is totally wrong, the bonnet isnt correct and there a re numorous seams that are missing.

Still a very good job. :D

[phoenix]

nice work but i am not statisfied with the steel the rest is lovely.........steel is too clean:)

[D-Wang]

Nice model :thumbsup:

would it be possible to see the unsmoothed wireframe?

[Psycholink]

Cool :D :thumbsup:

can I see wirefire ?

[Ti-Ki]

i prefer the light blue (not the darker one) color and reflection. But anyway i like them (nice angle in the second pic :) )

[JIII]

that is totally cool but yeah there does seem to be something funny about the roof.

nice pic and congrats on Cgtalk front page.

[oryan]

wireframe

[oryan]

The Mini ones that I modeled, I am not safe but I believe that it is of year 1959.


This is a real image of the MINI COOPER

http://www.adedo.cl/rafa/minireferenc.jpg

[oryan]

process


http://www.adedo.cl/rafa/process.jpg

[Psycholink]

Good wirefire :)
lowpoly nice!

:bounce: :bounce:

[oryan]

Thanks for the critics.

I will continue working and correcting the problems

[raorsque]

excelent wow !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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