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michelleblue
03-20-2003, 08:13 PM
Hi! Im in my final term at VancouverFilmSchool. This is a shot of one of my characters.
Feedback is appreciated. :)

http://www.vfs.com/~michellel/Shot3.jpg



http://www.vfs.com/~michellel/Shot3_Wire.jpg

http://www.vfs.com/~michellel/Shot3_MidTruck.jpg

http://www.vfs.com/~michellel/Shot3_ClosePan.jpg

Zoetrope
03-20-2003, 08:45 PM
wow! Nice textural quality. Great lighting, very moody. I'm a big fan of not what isn't seen/lit. Are the vines supposed to be apart of the staute? Or actual vines growing on the statue? I think this is a little unclear.
Nice style! :thumbsup:
Is this xsi? What's the story behind the character?

visionmaster
03-20-2003, 08:48 PM
i like it.
good modeling, but the image is perhaps too much "flat"
try to reduce the light fog..and try to dark the backround.
its just an opinion :)
really good work.

davids
03-20-2003, 09:13 PM
looks great! really like the mood of the scene! perhaps some more moss at the bottom? just a suggestion.

teh fury
03-20-2003, 09:26 PM
wow awesome modelling and texturing.. great work

seed
03-20-2003, 09:46 PM
Nice :bounce: Nice :bounce: Nice :bounce:

leigh
03-20-2003, 09:48 PM
Wow I really like that a lot :applause:

I really like the style of the final look - really interesting, almost like a comic book or graphic novel.

Very cool :thumbsup:

Goatfuzz
03-20-2003, 11:48 PM
VERY NICE! I love it! :beer:

-No complaints here...

ja3d
03-20-2003, 11:58 PM
I love this one, very good atmosphere. :applause:

manutara
03-21-2003, 01:32 AM
Nice work Mich:applause: Nice caustics in there:thumbsup:

The guy between the roots looks awesome!!!

amos_chid
03-21-2003, 01:56 AM
the way you present your model made this piece looks :buttrock:

really like the texture & lighting :thumbsup:

ceql
03-21-2003, 06:56 AM
hehe whoa, it looks great ;) I can almost imagine hearing the distant rainforesty ambience and trickling water :bounce: ;)

KolbyJukes
03-21-2003, 10:16 AM
I really like it, is this a finished render?

b2055329
03-21-2003, 11:23 AM
Nice image. reminds me of the the LOTR's, Lady of wood's water mirror. I would say that the image appears very flat to me.

unrealwarfare
03-21-2003, 01:02 PM
awesome work on the statue!

harly
03-21-2003, 05:15 PM
Great Atmosphere! It looks like a 2d Image but nevertheless eye-catching!!This could be part of an illustration series.
You got more similar stuff?

amos_chid
03-21-2003, 09:58 PM
any chance to share how u setup the scene ??

It looks GREAT :buttrock:

Guro
03-23-2003, 12:21 AM
really good work. :scream:

Aeroplane
03-23-2003, 03:52 AM
wow,awesome details,:applause: :thumbsup:

michelleblue
03-23-2003, 09:21 AM
Thanks everyone for the feedbacks! :bounce:


Zoetrope: The Statue is meant to be over grown by vines, there should be more vines on the upper body but I ran out of time. It is done with XSI. Im still working on the story, but if you are still interested, my demo reel will be done in 5 weeks. :cool:

visionmaster: I will make another pass on the lighting for sure.

davids: I had some in there, I guess it should have more huh?

ceql: ha! That is excatly what I had in mind. :beer:

KWAK: No, I plan to make some changes. :)

amos_child: hmm, how I setup the scene? Do you mean the wireframe?

Guro: Your drawings are amazing! :thumbsup:

D.Q
03-23-2003, 10:08 AM
Awesome!Fantastic!

Where is your school?

kinston
03-23-2003, 10:10 AM
hi:
wow really great work, the concept is great..the lighting is great, the composition and shows ur have a great art sense . especially the overall colour mood...

KnightVFX
03-25-2003, 09:19 PM
I love the feel of your render. It's looking very nice. I tend to agree that it's looking a bit flat. It is giving it a cool style, if that is what you are going for. If not, I think that it may be because of a couple of reasons. For one, I think that your highlights are a bit too intense on the statue. And I also think that you could benefit from some darker shadows under the arms. I also think that you could use some more moss, and more green in the vines, it would make them seem more like vines. Finally, I think that your textures on the statue could use a bit more cracks and imperfections. You have a few large cracks, but not many small ones. Just a thought. I really like how it's turning out though. Who knew a girl at VFS could do so well ;) Just kidding. Well done.

Neox
03-25-2003, 09:31 PM
just beautiful!

pablov
03-25-2003, 09:37 PM
pleaseeee!!!! front page or gallery award for this girl!!!!!!!!!

beautiful great job Michelle!!
:buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

michelleblue
03-25-2003, 11:53 PM
I have added a couple more renders. :bounce:

Thanks for the feedback again guys! :D

LowEndFrequency
03-26-2003, 01:00 AM
I love this peice, the amount of detail is amazing. Excellent modeling skills. THe online critique I have is the render, it looks grainy. ANd also your bump mapping stands out a bit too much, turn doen the bump values on the vines and possibly some other textures. But thats just what I'd do, like I said this is an excellent peice.

davids
03-26-2003, 03:23 AM
Wholy crap that is wicked modelling!.. I know this is my second post but those close ups wow.. EXCELLENT!! texturing amazing! great work!:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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