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NH
06-25-2007, 08:35 AM
nabil hamadi is entered in the "Strange Behavior Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/strange_behavior/view_entries.php?challenger=12561)

Latest Update: Final Image: the forest guardian
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Geta-Ve
06-25-2007, 08:37 AM
Yo! Good luck!

NH
06-25-2007, 08:45 AM
Thank you Geta-Ve i hope i'll have enough time to finish this one :)
Waiting for the entries of some good friends and challengers I knew during the EON challenge c'mon guys let's go :scream:
GOOD LUCK for all the challengers. See you soon.

OKMER
06-25-2007, 03:22 PM
Hey,hey Buddy!!!Nice to be here with you again!Loads of fun and .....may ze forzz be wizz you!!
And loads of :beer: ofcourse again!

Tu es sur cfsl aussi?
:beer:

NH
06-25-2007, 03:26 PM
Yep loads of :beer:
Non je regarde souvent cfsl mais je ne suis pas dessus, ptet un jour :)
See ya buddy

NH
06-25-2007, 04:22 PM
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Just a first sketch to warm up a little :)...Inspired by an old french song from my childhood talking about a rabbit who killed a hunter heh! I hope i'll find better ideas soon. Let me know what you think about this.

NH
06-26-2007, 11:24 AM
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Still searching for a good idea :)

dmonk
06-26-2007, 12:39 PM
Is the big Bunny going to be the Dick Cheney Bunny. Political satire works if your into that. Nice sketches!

plasteredcat
06-27-2007, 11:07 AM
Watch out for those two! :scream: Great concept, good stuff...:thumbsup:

NH
06-27-2007, 11:39 AM
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My new idea :) A sexy effeminatized gladiator... maybe i'll add an amazed lion or a three time his height second gladiator... i don't know yet :)
Any crits or suggestions ?

icedeyes
06-27-2007, 11:49 AM
the gladiator concept is great (i like it better than the bunnies)... the bunnies remind me of elmer... mean bunnies...

OKMER
06-27-2007, 12:01 PM
Hey hey nice idea!I can already see the amazed funny faces of the lions, or the big bad gladiator just behind him with a kind of degusted look on his face...Chouette,chouette ca pet(et ca rime)!Looking forward to the next episode!

Jassar
06-27-2007, 01:19 PM
Hey Nabil, great sketches so far... I like that gladiator :)
Cheers and good luck!

NH
06-27-2007, 03:04 PM
Heyy thank you guys for your support :)
Stay tuned i think that I found my idea :bounce:

madein1027
06-28-2007, 09:04 AM
:thumbsup: you have always somes inerestings ideas!
I like so much the movement of the sexy gladiator and his shield with a heart, that's SO FUNNY !
Maybe his sword and his decoration aren't bigs and heavys enough for show a contrast. What do you think?:)
I wait for your new skethces !

Geta-Ve
06-28-2007, 09:41 AM
Damn both concepts are great I find myself torn between the two. The galdiator one reminds me of one of the fighters from Mike Tysons Punch Out for the NES.

I love the bunnies though.

I think if I had to choose I would go with teh bunnies, they give off that strange behaviour vibe just a bit more.

nwiz25
06-30-2007, 03:00 AM
wooooooooooohooooooooooooooooo! hello buddy! :scream::bounce: great to c ya once again! let the games begin! hehehehe:D crazt sexy cool concept!:applause: :P waiting to c more from ya bro!
have fun! :P

Slav
06-30-2007, 05:55 AM
i really hope you are going to do something with those bunnies. they are great!

NR43
06-30-2007, 09:49 AM
the gladiator looks very funny... and so do the rabbits

NH
07-01-2007, 10:18 AM
wooooooooooohooooooooooooooooo! hello buddy! :scream::bounce: great to c ya once again! let the games begin! hehehehe:D crazt sexy cool concept!:applause: :P waiting to c more from ya bro!
have fun! :P

Heyyy this is my friend nwiz25, hope you doin fine doode, welcome back man!

NH
07-01-2007, 10:22 AM
Slav, NR43 and the other doods, thank you for your support. Well i think i'll return to my first idea about bunnies, but i'll change some little details ( nieheheheh) Stay tuned guys
i think you'll like the new study coming soon ;). Cheers everybody

DougFerreira
07-02-2007, 04:15 PM
and a funny Idea!Good luck on the contest!I wanna see how this gladiator idea is going to evolve!is there going to be some "normal" gladiators around him??

http://douglas-animation.blogspot.com

SteevieWoo
07-09-2007, 12:57 AM
Hi there !
Im happy to see you are coming back to the bunnies, they're great! the fact the remid you of Elmer just adds to the classic feeling of it...you could even use a "vintage palette" for the color... i don't know......................

Don't be a stranger, jusy behave strangely:D!

NH
07-09-2007, 05:04 PM
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Well, here is some of my sketches about angels... I want to develop a story about a team of angels, a kind of a special angels unit wich came on earth for a very special mission... I still don't know what but I hope I would have more precisions next time.
Cheers

NH
07-09-2007, 05:18 PM
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Well, here is some of my sketches about angels... I want to develop a story about a team of angels, a kind of a special angels unit wich came on earth for a very special mission... I still don't know what but I hope I would have more precisions next time.
Cheers

madein1027
07-15-2007, 09:27 PM
Excellent, have an idea about the angels and the angel female is very sexy ! :thumbsup:
I'm curious to decourir a story about the angels...
Good courage for the continuation:)

sgw
07-15-2007, 10:11 PM
Love the rabits with the guns :)

Micro26
07-16-2007, 12:01 AM
very cool sketches man, the gladiator is funny man and so is the bunnies expression and pose.
keep it up

NH
07-16-2007, 10:52 AM
Thank you guys for your support :)
More to come soon :wip: (http://forums.cgsociety.org/misc.php?do=getsmilies&wysiwyg=1&forumid=0#) :wip:

NH
08-09-2007, 02:47 PM
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Okayyyy ! Hi everybody, this is my new concept, I would paint a strange girl which got lost in deep forest when she was young she lost her parents in that day. Everybody thought that all the family was eaten by wolves and
little by little forgot about this story. But an old hunter wich became a story teller is still telling about a savage girl living in the deep forest speaking with animals, wearing stag horns and fur. He also says that she spends her days to allure the hunters mislaid, to kill them thereafter and make trophies with their heads...

SteevieWoo
08-10-2007, 05:45 AM
Hey good to see you around!:beer:

This last one is creepy good! Creepy and sexy mix so well, and the result is always kind of weird, which is great for this contest, so Lets see how it comes along!

You were like, the second one to post in my thread, Man, I'll never forget that! Thanks a lot!

NH
08-10-2007, 11:18 AM
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a speed color test... I'm trying to find the atmosphere :)

ziriguidum
08-10-2007, 11:52 AM
wow! good line! I will watch your topic.

NH
08-10-2007, 03:43 PM
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Working on the girl attitude... trying to make here mysterious with an icy indifference... some crits or ideas ?

Frotze
08-10-2007, 03:57 PM
Wow, at first I thought it was going to lean toward some creepy, sort of horror-movie like illustration, but that last image you posted, with its nice warm colors, makes the scene even more mysterious and strange, like if that girl is acting in a totally innocent way, not really thinking if it's good or bad, or even knowing if there's such a thing. The only thing is that now it's not very obvious she did it, especially if one didn't read the backstory first. Maybe making her holding an other hunter's head in a sort of relaxed way, he right arm on her thigh, with a blank trophee holder on the wall, but keeping her with the same indifferent attitude, would make all of this even clearer.

AlonChou
08-11-2007, 04:05 AM
great work! nice pic!

NH
08-13-2007, 08:40 AM
@ SteevieWoo : tnx mate, i'am following your work with attention :)
@ ziriguidum : Tnx dood, no crits ? :D
@ Frotze : Nice crits and suggestions ! I'll add some details soon to make hesr starnge behavior obvious :)
@ AlonChou : Thank you mate ! Your work is amasing ! Nice to know you on my thread :)

Stay tuned guys more to come soon !

ziriguidum
08-13-2007, 11:42 AM
No, dude. Your art is beautifull.
good update :applause:

shattered-fx
08-13-2007, 05:04 PM
Hi Nabil,

Your colors in painterly style is awesome!:thumbsup:.. Can't wait for the updates on the composition and the other elements youll be putting in that will clearly define her strange behaviour..Goodluck!

-Raffy

MY STRANGE BEHAVIOR ENTRY (ILLUSTRATION)

NH
08-14-2007, 08:50 AM
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Searching for the right atmosphere and colors... Maybe I'll change May'sanatomy and pose (=>the girl, yep I found a name for her :) ), the hunter's face too...

madein1027
08-14-2007, 11:18 AM
Excellent ! :) La tête du chasseur est raccroché sur le mur, il y a du sang couvert à la moitié du visage, et surtout le sang continue de couler, une ambiance tendu,hummmmmm,c'est très réussi !



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Searching for the right atmosphere and colors... Maybe I'll change May'sanatomy and pose (=>the girl, yep I found a name for her :) ), the hunter's face too...

NH
08-17-2007, 01:55 PM
@ ziriguidum : :D thank you mate, i'll make it better soon :beer:
@ idyeaah : HAHA more stuff is coming soon, it would be cool if you can comment the composition i'll post :beer:
@ madein1027 : Heh, I didn't knew that you like glaucous atmosphere Lu ! :twisted:

Thank you guys aiting for your next comments and crits buddies

NH
08-17-2007, 03:37 PM
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This is my new concept of May's face and expression, actually I am working on a new pose less sexy ;) and more mysterious... Crits, comments and ideas are welcome :)

abeytwabey
08-17-2007, 08:25 PM
Excellent drawing. This unfinished work has a soul all of its own. Facial expression and the choppy composition is organized in a way very pleasing to the eyes, and this is not simply because of he what is drawn, but how it has be drawn. Again, great "unfinished" work.

NH
08-17-2007, 08:29 PM
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More details, the whole composition is coming soon... Any crits ?

NH
08-17-2007, 09:05 PM
Excellent drawing. This unfinished work has a soul all of its own. Facial expression and the choppy composition is organized in a way very pleasing to the eyes, and this is not simply because of he what is drawn, but how it has be drawn. Again, great "unfinished" work.

WOW thank you so much Abeytwabey ! :blush: I think that it made a good choice when i decided to redraw May, glad to know that you liked the facial expression.
Thanks again and stay tuned !
PS: what do you think about my last post ? :D

OKMER
08-17-2007, 11:55 PM
Just love the concept Nabil!!!The power of the dark site is strong!:twisted:
You got great drawingskills man,wwoooo...
Indeed really nice unfinished work.
Yap temps au compliments jedi,haha!Quand il faut le dire, buh,,,faut le dire quoi:D
Cheers buddy and keep up the good work!
Later

Jeffparadox
08-18-2007, 12:10 AM
I love your drawing style, it's so academic when you want, and illustrative when you want otherwise. I really dig your last post, no stylistic cheats nothing, a real academic figure drawing. refreshing to see here. see you around..

Frotze
08-18-2007, 01:01 AM
I agree with everything that's been said. This last sketch is amazing. Can't wait to see it with colors.

madein1027
08-21-2007, 08:40 AM
Very nice sketch and very nice girl!:thumbsup: Le renard et les lapins sont très mignons, je les adore ! Les oreils du femme sont excellents, ça attire l'oeil ! Par contre quelle couleures des cheveux tu mettras, rouge, blanc, ou d'autre ?
Best of luck with your new sketch and looking forward !

NH
08-21-2007, 11:16 AM
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Hi there, this a color test on May's face, I didn't fixed the final indoor lighting and tints yet. I have to finish the line art before but I could not resist to the temptation to make her come alive and share this attempt with you :)
Comments are welcome.

Gune
08-21-2007, 11:20 AM
keep it up and good luck!

madein1027
08-21-2007, 01:54 PM
Génial, Nab !!!
J'adore la couleure des cheveux ! Ca donne une image d'un roi des animaux, sauvage et sexy !:)

walrus
08-21-2007, 02:25 PM
Beautiful face, bouboul! Nice work!

Anatomista
08-21-2007, 02:39 PM
Your last sketch is awesome. I would go on with that.

Noisetank
08-21-2007, 03:12 PM
Your main character looks wonderful and very natural, keeping this mind i think will really make a difference in the long run. As for the colour tests i think if she was native to the woods and spent most of her time outside then her body and complexion would be much more cold blood orientated. So it might be worth trying a very pale skin tone and adding patches of the brown fur growing down from her ears.

icedeyes
08-21-2007, 06:21 PM
I really really love this concept but at the moment it shouts sexy and not necessarilly strange... every element by itself introduced so far is looking trully amazing but you might want to try paler tones and maybe more dramatic lighting to enhance the strange feeling...

Just a couple of thoughts.. keep it up...
George

DanielSLimon
08-22-2007, 10:12 AM
WOW! i really like your way to work, I'm going to follow your thread, sure :)

NH
08-22-2007, 10:32 AM
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Hi, this is my work on the background, it's the old forest house where May lives with her little friends, it's also where she traps her victims. I worked with photo references for the old wood and the chimney... I'll probably add some other elements soon and of course the trophy of the poor hunter. I still didn't work on the lightings and tints, I guess it will be hard to create a strange and frightening atmosphere with these, that's why your comments, suggestions and crits will be very helpful guys ! Let me know about your thoughts :)

NH
08-22-2007, 01:12 PM
@ Gune :Thanks mate !
@ madein1027 : Merci Lu !
@ walrus : Thanks Michael, it's great to see ya on my thread man !
@ Anatomista : Thanks dood, what do you think about the update ?
@ Noisetank : I'll start real color tests soon, thank you for these good suggestions.
@ icedeyes : As I said before, I didn't started the tones and lighting work yet, I'll try my best to make the whole composition more strange, your thought will be very helpful. Thanks George, don't hesitate to drop more thoughts !
@ DanielSLimon : Thank you for your support mate ! Let me know about your thoughts and crits dude !

I really want to finish this one and I need more and more crits and ideas to improve this attempt guys ( encouragements are welcome too :D )!
Thank you all !

DanielSLimon
08-22-2007, 01:31 PM
OK, but really, I haven't crits, only I have fallen in love with your girl of white hair :love:

NH
08-22-2007, 01:35 PM
HAHAHAHA ! But she's a killer be careful ! You like hunting ? HAHAHA !
Thanks mate ! Stay tuned !

DanielSLimon
08-22-2007, 02:48 PM
HAHAHAHA ! But she's a killer be careful ! You like hunting ? HAHAHA !
Thanks mate ! Stay tuned !

Yes sure! but, i can be hunted by her! HAHAHA aouurrghh HAHAHA
:scream:

madein1027
08-22-2007, 08:38 PM
Franchement, la cheminée et la texture de bois créent une vraie ambiance mystèrieuse ! La tête du chasseur doit s'accrocher sur la cheminée, non? :thumbsup: avec du sang, et tout?
J'ai hâte de le voir... Bon courage pour la suite !

NH
08-24-2007, 03:45 PM
Heyyy...glad to know that you like the background LU ! Yes the hunter's head will be on the chimney. And yes it will be bloody :twisted:
Tnx Lu and stay tuned :D

icedeyes
08-24-2007, 05:17 PM
the bg is looking very very nice... cant wait to see more as this progreses...

have fun,
George

NH
08-26-2007, 07:31 PM
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Hi, this my last lighting and values study, I also added the hunter's head which I will surely redraw soon. Let me know about your thoughts and crits :)

SteevieWoo
08-27-2007, 06:43 AM
Wow it's really evolved now, looks like you're having fun with it!

That fireplace is beautifully eerie.:thumbsup::thumbsup:

NH
08-27-2007, 04:29 PM
@ icedeyes: Tnx more detailed version is coming soon
@ SteevieWoo: tnx dood :beer:

No more crits? :banghead:

:D:D

icedeyes
08-27-2007, 09:36 PM
hey nabil,

Everything looks very good so far... just two crits:

a) the rifle looks out of balance and the position of the hand anhances the feeling.. like she is pushing is down...

b) the fox seems strange there... also feels like the fox is cut halfway by the rifle back...

keep us posted,
George

Ferx
08-28-2007, 03:44 AM
Hey Nabil, that is great ! I really liked :thumbsup: Perhaps a fire in the fireplace put a dramatic lighting for the scene, only a comment. Again great work!

OKMER
08-28-2007, 02:54 PM
Yehhéé, come on baby,light my fire!!!Love it Bouboule, just love it!No crits, just beer!Cheers!

NH
08-31-2007, 11:20 AM
@ icedeyes : Thanx mate, I'll change this rifle and the position of the fox :thumbsup:
@ Frex : Yep you are right buddy, I'll put some fire. Thanx for the suggestion :thumbsup:
@ Okmer : Yeeeeha, thanx for your support, your bunny bot is awesome so let's :beer:

Thank you guys for your ideas and support, stay tuned. Cheers everybody

popol
09-01-2007, 12:43 AM
exellent nabil keep up the good work !!
You can maybe make the fox a little bit bigger.:thumbsup:

melkao
09-01-2007, 03:40 AM
The idea looks nice....good job mith scketches!...i don't want to meet her!:scream:

tAstyBITs
09-02-2007, 12:46 AM
It's looking good! I looking forward to further updates.

NH
09-03-2007, 04:47 PM
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Testing some colors for the atmosphere, I have to rebuilt shadows since I added fire in the chimney ( workin on it) :)

JurajMolcak
09-03-2007, 04:54 PM
Hey, I just wanna say that I really really like the spirit of this entry. Keep up great work. Good luck :thumbsup:

madein1027
09-04-2007, 09:13 AM
A good job, Nab ! :thumbsup:

L'ombre des arbres sur les planche est très réussi ! Avec la lumière de la lune, franchement, on peut se sentir quelque chose d'étrange qui se passe dehors. D'autre part, la flamme et la lumière de la lune s'opposent, humm, c'est une exellent idée !
I pense que tu vas améliorer le profil du chasseur et la cheminée,non? J'ai hate de les voir !
Bon courage pour la suite ! :buttrock:

Ferx
09-04-2007, 07:44 PM
Hey Nabil, that its a great work !! I really enjoy your painting!! great !! :thumbsup: The fire puts a great lighting note and like says Madein1027 , the moon light and the fire light is a great combination, and excellent idea, nice work mate!! :beer:

medunecer
09-04-2007, 08:49 PM
hey Nabil! Rabbits, gay gladiators and angels were great, but this new character (May) and topic is FANTASTIC! She's so sexy! Really love her!

Can't wait to see more! Good luck!

guterrez
09-04-2007, 09:29 PM
I have to say I like this 2nd version much better than the first one, the girls expression is quite cool
there are some small anatomy issues, the hand she`s touching the rifle with looks a bit awkward and also the foot on the left side shouldn`t dissappear behind...whatever she`s sitting at
coloring is really nice so far, I`m curious about your next step

NH
09-05-2007, 09:13 AM
@ popol : Tnx mate, i'll try to make a bigger fox and see :)
@ melkao : Heh ! DanielSLimon don't think the same HAHAHA ! Thanks dude :)
@ tAstyBITs : stay tuned buddy :thumbsup:
@ Oweron : thank you so much for your support :)
@ madein1027 : Hey Lu thanks sweety, yep I'll improve the design of the hunter's head soon ( and many other things )
@ Ferx : Maaan thank you ! you read french ?! :applause: kewl !!! Cheers mate !
@ medunecer : Thank you buddy! Be careful DanielSLimon is already in love with her :D
@ guterrez : Hey hey, finally some anatomy crits :D about the hand: the hole arm is posed on the edge of an old chair ( not yet designed ) that's why it is slackened but not awkward :) About the foot : it is covered by the stag fur she wear ( not yet painted ) :) Stay tuned buddy and thank you for the crits :thumbsup:

NH
09-10-2007, 10:21 AM
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Hi there. I started working on rabbits fur and lighting, let me know about your thoughts, I am also working on may, more updates soon :)

madein1027
09-17-2007, 09:23 AM
:thumbsup: Good Job, Nab !
Je suis craquée par les lapins ! Ils sont très très mignons, notamment leurs oreilles sont bien faits. Il faut que tu le finisses, Nab ! Bon courage pour la suite !

Sovica
09-17-2007, 12:11 PM
Okay, this is a Tarzan-ish idea... But you made it work very well.
I like how you changed May from the pin-up looking girl to more natural one... unspoiled one might say...
I keep thinking how the thing would look without the fire and just some gloomy rays falling on her through a window... You know, with the dust in the air and stuff....

Kudos for the bunnies =)

Keep up the good work!

NH
09-30-2007, 07:30 PM
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Hi everybody, it's been along time since I uploaded something here. Too much work during this last period ! So, here is my new version of May I changed some face details and worked on her hair... She needs more work and
I hope I'll find enough time to finish this work, I'll do my best !
Good luck for all the buddies, I saw a lot of impressive stuff evolving on
this challenge.

nwiz25
09-30-2007, 08:04 PM
hey bro!! damn .. she looks so beautiful! :love: :eek: love the new concept a lot!
this will rock the house! :bounce: me looking forward to your next update! :p .. cheers bro! :beer: all the best to you! :thumbsup:

NH
10-01-2007, 02:14 PM
Hey hey ! How you doin'bro ! Thanx for your support dood ! Your work is great too :)
All the best for ya too

MartinNielsen
10-03-2007, 09:37 PM
Cool piece :thumbsup: It could be interesting to see what she actually uses those antlers for. I bet that would look really "strange" :)

SteevieWoo
10-08-2007, 12:40 AM
dang! she's so appealing! I guess that's part of her trap! really sexy sight!
I think she needs a bit more of the greenish backlight on her face and shadow too, her right cheek is a bit flat, If you can mix the two light sources there as you did on the knee or boob I think she'll look great! BTW I love the detail behind her head... is so moody!!

Well I really hope you can get done with this one! It has evolved a lot indeed!!:thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup:

NH
10-14-2007, 11:36 AM
@ SteevieWoo : Thank you so much for these cool crits dude ! I'll do mybest to fix all these details and try to fininsh on time. It's a little bit hard with all the work I have to finish in the same time :)
Cheers mate !
Good luck for everybody

NH
10-15-2007, 10:29 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12561/12561_1192483794_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12561/12561_1192483794_large.jpg)

Working hard and tryin' to find time to finish :)

guterrez
10-15-2007, 11:57 PM
nice progress man, it would be a shame if you wouldn`t finish this piece
I think her titties are realistic enough, now finish the rest^^
the colors are great, the fur, the fox and her leg are coming along really cool

NH
10-16-2007, 09:05 AM
@ guterrez : Heheheh thank you mate ! I'll do my best :)

madein1027
10-16-2007, 09:32 AM
BRAVO !EXCELLENT BOULOT !:thumbsup:
L'effet de la fourrure est bien réussie, ça me donne l'envie de la toucher, je l'adore ! ( La flamme, l'ombre des arbres et les petits animaux sont très bien. Je l'avait dit paravant, donc je le répète pas. =p ) .
Je trouve que dans la scène toutes les choses sont bien faites, et qu'il manque donc une chose qui est la plus importante, et qui attire directement à la regarde. Peut-être que la cheminée et la flamme doivent être moins focalisé, non?
Il faudra que tu le finisses, bon courage !

http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12561/12561_1192483794_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12561/12561_1192483794_large.jpg)

Working hard and tryin' to find time to finish :)

walrus
10-16-2007, 02:41 PM
Hi, bouboul, good to see you still busy. I know it's very much still a work in progress and you probably already see these points, but just in case:

Her foot on the floor seems to be floating there instead of anchored. (Same for the left rabbit.) Some more solid shadows underneath them should help.

Her other foot seems to be missing.... took me a second to see that it was snuggled up in the fur because they're such a similar value. Changing the value of the fur, or just emphasizing the dark shadow on the fur where it overlaps could help that a lot.

And the last crit is that you're not done yet. Don't you crap out on another Challenge! You're really close, you'd better go the last mile and finish this thing, I mean it!!! :)
Now get back to work! ;)

...good luck!

-mike

plasteredcat
10-19-2007, 08:25 PM
This has come along quite nicely, and the comp looks somehow very original to me. I agree with Michael above, don't just dump this, give it a final push, mate!! It' s looking great, just a bit of polishing here and there and you're done!

NH
10-21-2007, 08:41 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12561/12561_1192995697_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12561/12561_1192995697_large.jpg)

Hi everybody, still tryin ti find spare time to finish this work. I hope i'll finish on time :)

NH
10-21-2007, 08:48 PM
@ Walrus: thanks mate for these crits and all your encouragement ! I'll do my best to finish this time.
@ Harachte: Dude I am polishing! I am polishing! Thanks for you support !

Thank you guys, best of luck for everybody :)

jocz
10-22-2007, 12:49 AM
Really like your composition and your drawing,
I especially like the face of your character, great work.

Dutchman
10-22-2007, 01:40 AM
Wow, that's some very nice work! Interesting idea and composition with a nice spark of 'surrealism' to it: that sets an amazing mood! :thumbsup: Also the execution is great, and well detailed.

My only point of critique could be that the left rabbit and the fire could use a little more contrast - they look a bit 'flat' to me.

All the best on finishing it - you have one more week for further finishing - that must be enough, wouldn't it? :)

NH
10-22-2007, 07:00 PM
@ jocz: Thank you :)
@ Dutchman : Thanx, yep the fire and the rabbit need more work, I will fix this ;)
Thanx again for your support

NH
10-22-2007, 07:03 PM
@ jocz: Thank you :)
@ Dutchman : Thanx, yep the fire and the rabbit need more work, I will fix this ;)
Thanx again for your support !

NH
10-27-2007, 12:39 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12561/12561_1193441942_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12561/12561_1193441942_large.jpg)

Working on the head, let me know about your crits guys :)
http://boobooli.idoo.com/hunter_head.gif (http://boobooli.idoo.com/hunter_head.gif)

Cheers

3dRaven
10-27-2007, 02:05 AM
Wow really nice work so far. Love the skin tones on her :D.

The hunters face seems pretty uniformly lit. Most of the shadows in the pic are at the left so adding them into the face at that angle would help it blend in better.

Maybe add in a wooden plaque behind the head? You know the fancy types with a bronze sign underneath.

Pitty the hunter can't be lit by the fire itself. You could then expose lets say some glassy eyes with a tint of orange from the fire.

NH
10-27-2007, 09:34 AM
@ 3dRaven : Thanks for these good crits ! I didn't finishied the had ( I know I am very late)
But I will add most of the things you talked about :)
Cheers

NH
10-28-2007, 12:41 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12561/12561_1193571700_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12561/12561_1193571700_large.jpg)

more details

IlincaMilosan
10-28-2007, 05:56 PM
This is coming out nicely! I like the little details on the fur and everything. The blood seems a bit too bright I think.
Good luck!

walrus
10-28-2007, 07:01 PM
Looking good - hope you're almost finished! I'm in agreement with Ilinca about the blood - dried blood gets very dark, but even if it were perfectly fresh, it would be darker and maybe less saturated. Also, it feels as though his face is net as crisp and as fleshed out as her face is. Anyhow, coming along nicely. Not much time to refine, but enough for you, I think... Good luck!

Nemesix
10-28-2007, 07:14 PM
Your skills are stunning. I really like your drawing and the whole process. A wonderful piece. Congratulations! Good luck!

OKMER
10-28-2007, 07:17 PM
HI NAbil!!Woowwww great man!ME too same as the others for the blood, and on the other han I do like it also as it brings in a nice note of color in that part of the pic.It alos gives a strange ,kind a irealistic feeling.Great work mate gogogo!!Q la force t'accompagne buddy!
:beer:

kikomunar
10-28-2007, 08:01 PM
I must say, you've got incredible skills! I'm also betting on this one! Good show and good luck!

NH
10-28-2007, 11:15 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12561/12561_1193609753_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/19/12561/12561_1193609753_large.jpg)

this the story of a strange girl which got lost in deep forest when she was young she lost her parents in that day. Everybody thought that all the family was eaten by wolves and
little by little forgot about this story. But an old hunter wich became a story teller is still telling about a savage girl living in the deep forest speaking with animals, wearing stag horns and fur. He also says that she spends her days to allure the hunters mislaid, to kill them thereafter and make trophies with their heads...

In this work I have tried to emphasize the contrast
between the components of the image and push it to the maximum
without loosing the glaucous atmosphere that I wanted to convey.
Where is the strange behavior? In fact, through this contrast this gorgeous creature hidden in the forest protecting her small companions by becoming a dangerous killer. Why is she doing this? Why is she killing all these hunters? This creature that seems so fragile and so alone... I find it very strange. And his expression as cold
as if she does not realized the magnitude of her act...

I would thank all the mates for their support and their good crits. Good luck for everybody It was so cool to be in this challenge :)

MartinNielsen
10-29-2007, 07:44 AM
Congrats. Nice final :thumbsup:

NH
10-29-2007, 01:32 PM
@ IlincaMilosan : thanx for your support :)
@ Walrus : Thanks dude for all your encouregements and you good and helpful crits
@ Nemesix : thank you so much, I am doin' my best to improve my rendreings, can't wait for the next challenge :)
@ Okmer: Hey buddy how you doin' ? Man you have to finish the incredible piece you started there's enough time now ;)
@ kikomunar: Oh thank you so much ! Good luck for everybody, there are a lot of stunning work around on this challenge ! It's really good to be part of it :D
@ MartinNielsen : tnx mate :)

madein1027
10-30-2007, 09:46 AM
Bravo, Nab ! :) that's so great !
La tête de chasseur est très réussite, surtout la lumière froide sur son visage, c'est excellent !

Anatomista
10-30-2007, 12:48 PM
I like what you did, man. Congratulations.

NH
11-01-2007, 11:05 PM
@ madein1027and @ Anatomista : Thank you so much for your support :)

DougFerreira
11-01-2007, 11:33 PM
It's a gorgeous illustration! Her face and anatomy are astounding!This should be used as advertisement to make hunters stop praticing their "sport".Good work ,and with a very important message!Congrats!

NH
11-04-2007, 12:12 PM
@ DougFerreira : glad to know you like it mate ! Thank you for your support :)

maantas
11-04-2007, 02:03 PM
hi, just whanted to say, very nice work. lovely.
just one question..
she is sitting on? fur?
of animal which she is protecting.. or?
:)

NH
11-06-2007, 04:47 PM
@ maantas: Haha ! Yep she's sitting on fur, this is the strange behavior ! Thank you for your encouragements. :)

nwiz25
11-07-2007, 04:59 AM
hey bro!!:bounce: CONGRATULATIONS on your fab finish! :love: :scream::applause: love her expression a lot! mystifying, delicate, her lethal beauty speaks for itself! wonderful execution my friend! wishing you good luck! :thumbsup: cheers dude! :beer:

Liuba
11-07-2007, 04:45 PM
She is quit beutiful... :) Cant' take my eyes over her! ^.^
Nice job! ;)

NH
11-10-2007, 08:35 AM
@nwiz25 : Thank you bro, your work is stunning too ! Good luck for you !
@Liuba : Thanks mate ! :)

In-Poculis
11-13-2007, 10:40 PM
Hi Nabil,

That's great work as usual,

The composition works well, and the serenity of the hunter doing scary stuff.

I love her ^^

Good luck Nab.

Ferx
11-14-2007, 01:37 AM
Hey Nabil, great concept mate! I like the atmosphere on the room, puts a great touch on the pose and expression of the young "Ártemis", really cold and beautiful.
Congratulations for this awesome art work! and good luck mate! Cheers! :beer:

NH
12-14-2007, 02:36 PM
@ In-Poculis& @ Frex : thank you guys ! :)

element5
12-20-2007, 12:29 PM
sorry I havn't posted, work keeps me busy :)

Love the idea and great final image.

Cheers
Mark

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