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therber2
06-21-2007, 10:16 PM
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Title: Car concept
Name: Tom Herbert
Country: USA
Software: Painter, Photoshop

Hey guys,

This one was done from a quick once over pencil sketch on marker paper. The design was sort of inspired by this picture I found of I think a Ducati. Then I scanned it in and used Painter mostly and some photoshop to color it. I did it all this morning...Im not sure how many hours. Let me know if you have any crits please.
therber2
06-22-2007, 06:16 PM
Hey guys,

Im really looking for some critiques on this. Let me know what you think.

Tom
B3liar
06-22-2007, 10:45 PM
I think you should spent more time in this work! The concept => aerodynamics are fatal! The proportions are incorrect and the painting itself looks.. loveless. :-/

That's my true opinion about. Other Pictures in your Gallerie looks better!
So invest the time!

regards,
B3liar
therber2
06-23-2007, 02:26 AM
Thanks B3liar for the honesty,

do you have any suggestions for improvements? the things you said before were rather vague. thanks! Im really new at this so im trying to get better.
B3liar
06-23-2007, 09:21 AM
Hm.. there are much things u can do better for a better result. But i think the importent thing is to practice more. Are you really statisfied with the result? No? Than work so long on it until u are. (There are 3D/2D stills i works over 60 hours on it to complete.) You`ll see, you become better picture for picture and sometimes you'r able to do a great picture in a few hours. ;)

best wishes,

B3liar
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