CGTalk - daydreaming girl

megra

03-19-2003, 06:56 AM

http://madhattersociety.homestead.com/files/misc/daydream3.jpg

critiques welcome, as always. i kinna dropped off the face of the planet last week, so i apologize for not thanking the guys who critiqued my last pic^^;; sorry.

oh--this is done in pen, pencil and photoshop.

Jeebus

03-19-2003, 02:26 PM

I like it very much. It's very clean.... no uneaded lines.

I can't tell though, is she sitting at some desk or laying on the ground? If she's sitting at a desk, it looks like she's extending her torso too far across it. *shrug*

megra

03-19-2003, 02:33 PM

she's stretched out on the floor, ya. danke.

DanielConway

03-19-2003, 07:45 PM

her left eye needs to be moved down some what, its not in line with the other facial features which seem to be on a more consistant level..other than that its good

awesome pants

03-20-2003, 04:23 AM

sweet composition, I like the originality. the smooth colors work well, looks like it was done in colored pencil

Mangled Poly

03-20-2003, 07:28 AM

I love the style even more the composition totally awesome!

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