THOUGHTFUL EYES, Hasan Ali Akhtar (2D)

[LADmaticCA]

Wow 42 hours! I hope you can get a wacom to save some time. Love the lighting and colors!

[hasanaliakhtar]

Yeah Lucious I am planning to purchase one in near future I hope so..Thank u so much for admiring its lighting..Really nice to have ur comment..God bless u..Take carez..Keep smiling:)


Here are the WIP images I want to submit here..Thanks for viewing..:)

[petevisual]

nice try but it seems like lot more work is needed.

crit: IMO.parts look like pasted and do not blend, like brows, lashes, hair. strange bend of hair at right effects the formation of the forehead (pushing it in). skin looks very plain and flat and so does the light. her nose looks huge.

keep working and sharing. good luck.

[elnady]

Good work Hassan :)
nice feel to the painting,the nose could be more sharper imo
good job without a tablet!!

[Germfil]

I think it looks awesome, super impressed you did it with just a mouse. The lighting is sweet

[GHOGHNOOS]

it's very nice work but it has some problems . next time work more on the eye and the hair arond it and top of it and on the nose :thumbsup:

[Leon71]

All Kudos to you for going at this with a mouse. There's a lot of work gone into the eyes. The rest of the picture doesn't seem to have had equal focus. It feels a little bit as if elements were worked on seperately, almost as if the face, eyebrows, lips and hair are all on seperate layers. It's almost there.

I think if take a break and you go back to this piece in a couple of weeks you'll see where you need to take it.

Nice work though.

[kunkunlanak]

Hey Dude that´s great rendering! awesome lightning too

[hasanaliakhtar]

Hi Peter..Hmm well yeah I do agree on things which u have mentioned there but I have pointed out this thing in the description that its a dreamy look so it can be made like that..I hope u can understand my point of view there..In dreamz u can only see few highlights and shadows but I have given that depth to it for the precise presentation of it which is needed..And to me nose is good a lil long but I have achieved that thing which I wanna achieved in that..Highly appreciate ur comments..Will keep those valuable points in my mind for realism workings..Thanks alot..Take carez..God bless u..Cheers:)

[hasanaliakhtar]

Thank u so much Ahmad for liking this digital painting dude..Yeah I agreed wid u the feel of the image is good..Thanks alot for ur suggestions and comments God bless u..Cheers:)

Thank u so much Jaron for liking its lighting and the whole artwork..Am glad u liked it..Thanks alot for ur comments..Take carez..God bless u..Cheers:)

[hasanaliakhtar]

Ahaan sure Pouya..Will improve my skills further..Thanks alot for ur comments and suggestions..Take carez..God bless u..Cheers:)

Hi Paul..Well yeah u r right each and everything is on a seperate layer my friend..Well thank u so much for ur nice suggestions will keep those things in my mind for future work..Loads of thanks for admiring the work as well..Take carez..God bless u..Cheers:)

[hasanaliakhtar]

Thanks a million Xanti for liking it to such an extent..Really glad u liked it..Thanks..So nice of u..Take carez..God bless u..Keep smiling:)

[petevisual]

so "dreamy look" is a license to do whatever one wants to. that is all right then. but then i dont see any point in asking for comments and suggestions in the description. strange approach.

okaiee be happy.

[MoonVisionStudio]

Hi Hasan,

I can barely remember back when I had nothing but the mouse to work in Photoshop, painful indeed. Did you start with a pencil drawing? I think if you start with a drawing you can work some of the anatomical details a little more and further refine it once you bring it into the computer. Good Luck.

[hasanaliakhtar]

Hi Jose..Thank u so much for ur comments..Highliy appreciated Sir..Well no I havnt sketched it on paper..Directly made a shape first wid a pen tool and then just worked further on it on photoshop..I had planned to to sketch it first but then decided against it cuz of the time..Well highly appreciate ur comments and suggestions..Will keep those precious points for my next painting indeed..So nice of u..Take carez..God bless u..Keep smiling:)

[RFeurhuber]

Hi Hasan,

I really like the biotipe from character, the nose shape and eyes are very beautyfull but i have to agree that some parts from the painting are way too "hard", looking like you paste after the work was done.

In portraits, a kind of tip is also try to "Mirror" the image, just to check the simetry of the face.

[hasanaliakhtar]

Hi Reinaldo..I really appreciate ur comments and suggestions..Will do that mirror thing in future projects..Thanks a million for that good tip..Much appreciated..Take carez..loads of thanks for liking it..God bless u..Take carez..Cheers:)

[elmoooo]

hey hasan
pretty cool girl u got going on here
i like the color scheme of this one
i dont know why but she reminds me a little of kate winslett lol :)
the only crit i can give u is to pull the neck back a little
ilike those lips
take care

[hasanaliakhtar]

Thank u so much Emanuel..Highly appreciate ur comment as well as a good suggestion..Well yeah u have guessed it right :cool: ..I have used a Kate winslet's reference pic which u can see there in my WIPs submitted here in this thread..Thank u so much for liking the colors..Will keep that suggestion in my mind for future workings..Will fit it soon..Take carez..All the best..God bless u..Keep smiling:)

[PinkParasol]

Beautifully rendered image. The colors are very soft. You did that with a mouse?! Wow!

[hasanaliakhtar]

Thank u so much Anne for admiring and appreciating my work to such an extent..Glad u really liked it..Well yeah it has been made up wid mouse..Thanks a million..Take carez..God bless u..Cheers:)

[CGTalk Moderation]

This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.