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doffer
06-13-2007, 12:46 PM
Hi guys.

This is kinda my first real drawing. Usually I'm working with 3d graphics, but some 2d skills would certainly be helpfull, so I thought I would practise that a bit.

This i really my first drawing, in the sense that usually when I draw, itīs small skethces on napkins and such.

This is drawn in Photoshop CS with Wacom Intuos.
I would like some crits on the anatomy.

I know the standart for this picture is a bit below the avarage, but I hope it's okay, and you will take time to crit it a bit. Please feel free to do a paintover if that would help you explain :)

http://doffer.dk/showoff/falling_9.jpg

Cheers - oh and sorry for my bad english :)
DeusEx
06-13-2007, 03:16 PM
She has a very large head. Might be a perspective thing. If thats the case it looks flat. The colors are great. It really pops out.
doffer
06-13-2007, 04:04 PM
Hey DeusEx
Thanks for the comments.
Yeah, your right about the head. I'll look into that.

And thanks about the color :)
Sanislov
06-13-2007, 06:24 PM
looks funny:) But if she's falling, why looks like happy:rolleyes:
I will wathin' it
Chymo
06-15-2007, 04:49 PM
I'd say also that her arms and legs are out of proportion; arms being too big, legs being too small. Other than that and the head size, I'd say keep working on it. :)
doffer
06-15-2007, 04:59 PM
@Sanislov:

Yeah, the expression is on purpose though. I wanted her to smile, even though she was falling :)

@Chymo:

Thanks for your comments :)
Looks like your're right about it. I can see that, when it's pointed out. I'll go change that, when ever time comes up ;)
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