Girl WIP

[JonasNoell]

Concept is great, I'll keep a look on the model progress to see if it will come out as great as the concept. :thumbsup:

[Threedeemer]

Great start. :thumbsup:
nice character refs also. One quick thing you may need to change so it would look more accurate is the cheeks; make them fuller and rounder. Thats the general theme of this particular character, round and robust proportions.

[virtual_francky]

you are going great, but like threedeemer i found the cheeks too thin against the ref model, make them a little rounder that will give the model a sexier look like the draw ;)

[maxer]

can u tell me did u use..box modelling for this chick??.. or maybe somethin else... sorry if i sound dumb... cos i'm dumb.. :applause:

[Maxsmackage]

Yea the cheeks are strange, umm box modeled the hair, patch modeled the rest. I think I fixed 'em but I got some homeowrk to do so I'll post lata.

[Maxsmackage]

This better?
http://www.stiraboutlane.com/anim/maxsmackage/chick4.jpg

[Sharky]

I don't know if I'm right, but it seems your eyeballs are modeled in the head. You should better model them as spheres to make them move for the future...
I won't give you any other advise for the moment, I wait to see the next posts.
keep on working on it it will be cool ...

[TRyanD]

In the first pic you can see through the sockets :thumbsup:

Lovely, cant wait to see the final :applause:

[Maxsmackage]

^ Updated it above ^

[Angelus26]

I can only see the first render but it looks great so far, but I'd make the gap between the top lip and the nose smaller and the indentation less pronouced, it'll make her look a lot prettier, bottom lip also needs to curve in a bit more.

Still, great so far!:)

[Maxsmackage]

Updates! Wow only 3 pages back thats a new record!
http://www.stiraboutlane.com/anim/maxsmackage/chick6.jpg
http://www.stiraboutlane.com/anim/maxsmackage/chick7.jpg

[stone indian]

very nice. My only advise would be to work on the eyes just alittle more. they seem to be bulging out of the head. Over all great job.

[podoba]

good work
sketches are pretty. I'm looking forward to next reply.

[Maxsmackage]

My shitimafied boots
http://www.stiraboutlane.com/anim/maxsmackage/chick8.jpg

[The FreakyOne]

she reminds me of quin from daria

[Maxsmackage]

*Bumpage* and Updatage.

[Maxsmackage]

*Shameless bumping*

[Maxsmackage]

Comeone some msut have crits?
http://www.stiraboutlane.com/anim/maxsmackage/chick10.jpg

[ndat]

Hmm... I really like how this is turning out :) I thought you quit a while ago, glad to see you didnt. I think you need to flesh out her butt a little more. Also you might want to take the ridge and make it wider and more subtle. You could though, take it out all togther since its a cartoon and doesnt need to be anotomically correct.

hope that helps, I think if you keep it up you could have a really uniqe model :)

[Ned the djed]

hi!

maybe you can soften a little the head (this would fit more your cartoon style)....


that's all!

keep going! good modeling:bounce:

[Maxsmackage]

I'm gonna work on that stuff ina lil bit,
Me Quit? Hell no! I jsut get bored occasionally then I get back to it :D

[Maxsmackage]

I made zee gloves! :D
http://www.stiraboutlane.com/anim/maxsmackage/chick11.jpg
http://www.stiraboutlane.com/anim/maxsmackage/chick12.jpg

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