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Ahmattu
06-09-2007, 12:45 PM
hi guys,

I need your critique on this bowling animation, Please.

[camera_1] [2.2 mb] http://www.ahmattu.com/cg_Critique/bowlingTest_1.mov

[camera_2] [2.4 mb] http://www.ahmattu.com/cg_Critique/bowlingTest_2.mov (http://www.ahmattu.com/cg_Critique/bowlingTest_2.mov)

Ahmattu
06-11-2007, 01:32 AM
I need your help please.

soulhill
06-12-2007, 02:52 AM
Unfortunately, neither of the links work. Let us know when you have the problem fixed.

jariullah
06-12-2007, 06:08 AM
Hi.
Nice animation. Well timed. I am not very good at animation myseld so I can't critique on it.
Good work though.

dARCKLOWN
06-12-2007, 08:58 AM
Its not to bad atm, the main thing would be that hes to stiff and a bit on the pose to pose side, try to get some more motion in there atm, cause hes floating between poses quite a bit but Youve got some nice starting animation there :)

Ahmattu
06-12-2007, 08:58 AM
Unfortunately, neither of the links work. Let us know when you have the problem fixed.

thanks Soulhill, I fixed the links, jariullah was able to access them, let me what do you think, thanks again.

Ahmattu
06-12-2007, 07:38 PM
Its not to bad atm, the main thing would be that hes to stiff and a bit on the pose to pose side, try to get some more motion in there atm, cause hes floating between poses quite a bit but Youve got some nice starting animation there :)

thanks for the critique, can I know which arm you mean, and where exactly you feel the stiffness?, thanks again.

thehive
06-15-2007, 01:45 PM
well from what i can see hes lettin the ball down toearly the throw has to be like an explosion of kenitic energy , keep the ball at his chest jus before he reaches the end the he gears up(anticpation), also hes too far away from the lane one reason i think it seems too long. this link should help see how it start off slow then increases in speed jus before the end an wips back to lunch the ball.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ckMRjPB-t6Q

Ahmattu
06-16-2007, 07:52 AM
well from what i can see hes lettin the ball down toearly the throw has to be like an explosion of kenitic energy , keep the ball at his chest jus before he reaches the end the he gears up(anticpation), also hes too far away from the lane one reason i think it seems too long. this link should help see how it start off slow then increases in speed jus before the end an wips back to lunch the ball.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ckMRjPB-t6Q

thanks for the tip+link

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